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ArtiR
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Fill out the form for your soldier. Doesn't get any simpler than that.

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Student Name:Alistair Hunter Blithe
Home of Origin:Dublin,Ireland
Current Army:Hornet Army(Commander)
Nickname (If applicable):N/A
Probable Origin of Nickname:N/A
Self-identification (Per Monitor Reports):Alistair
Physical Description-
Gender:Male
Current Age:13
Current Height:5'1''
Current Weight:115 lbs.
Hair Color:Red
Eye Color:Green
Additional Physical Information:N/A

Family Description-
Father:Gene Blithe
Mother:Alice Blithe
Siblings (If Applicable):None
Siblings Enlisted (If Applicable):N/A

Occupations of Parents-
Father:Doctor
Mother:Dentist
Family Notes:Has a mostly normal, happy relationship with parents, no real stress of note. Seems to be slightly distanced from his father, but doesn't seem actively hostile towards him.

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Personality Profile:Alistair is a confident, hard nosed, charismatic soldier, who always places his soldiers and his army before himself. He is often tough on his soldiers, particularly his toon leaders, but is friendly enough that soldiers willingly follow him without complaint. That said, Alistair has a short temper, and this coupled with his tendency to be incredibly blunt and sarcastic has made him several enemies. He can also be extremely neurotic, with a tendency to constantly re-examine past mistakes.

Medical History:No major injuries of note.

Academic History:Has been a consistently excellent student in almost all fields, although his grasp of higher math seems to be lacking. Excels in military history, and is at least adequate in most sciences.

Military and Tactical:Alistair is a skilled tactician, who understands how to use specialized units to carry out a complex strategy. He is extremely talented at forcing opponents to defend against various kinds of attacks, and he often makes it almost impossible for opponents to do anything but play to his strengths. He is moderately skilled at improvisation, however his insistence on keeping all of his squads intact often means that he takes severe casualties trying to rescue units that are best left to the enemy. His relatively hands off style also means that his victory or defeat rests more in the hands of his officers than himself.

Disciplinary History:While Alistair was suspended from Earth School several times for fighting, since arriving at Battle School he has rarely needed to be disciplined, with his most noteworthy incidents involving nearly coming to blows with several students who have insulted his army.

Battle Room Performance:Alistair has been very successful in the battle room.He excels in maneuvering,and his ability to understand the battle room environment's natural strengths and weaknesses has given him a significant advantage over many students.This coupled with a tendency to favor positions that give him a great view of the enemy have made up for the fact that he is a fairly inaccurate shot. That said, his occasional insistence on trying to hold a position that is best left abandoned has cost him, as his tendency to sacrifice himself to rescue his fellow soldiers.

Additional Comments:Strong Candidate for Command School.
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Student Name:Cameron Anthony Longinus
Home of Origin:Verona, Italy
Current Army:Hornet
Nickname (If applicable):Lance
Probable Origin of Nickname:Taken from the Lance of Longinus, a famed Lance that allegedly cut the side of Jesus.
Self-identification (Per Monitor Reports):Cameron
Physical Description-
Gender:Male
Current Age:12
Current Height:4'11''
Current Weight:103 Lbs.
Hair Color:Black
Eye Color:Green
Additional Physical Information:N/A

Family Description-
Father:Romulus Longinus
Mother:Celestine Longinus
Siblings (If Applicable):Cyril Longinus(Sister)
Siblings Enlisted (If Applicable):N/A

Occupations of Parents-
Father:Architect
Mother:Accountant
Family Notes:Seems to greatly admire his father, who he views as a man of great power, a builder of empires in a way. Is also fairly close with his younger sister. Sister, while intelligent, is likely too sensitive and docile for enrollment in battle school.

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Personality Profile:Cameron is an arrogant, narcissistic, but not overtly cruel soldier, who is charismatic enough to get people close to him, but not sensitive enough to truly understand their feelings and desires. Cameron has a tendency to view himself as the most important person in his life, and he places everyone else's needs beneath his own. This has led to him feeling that anyone who hinders his advancement, or who criticizes him, is attempting to sabotage him, a feeling that has led to several grudges. That said, he has been able to become close with several like-minded students, and through a mutual system of boosting each other's reputations he has been able to make several close, consistent friends. He is a controversial soldier in the battle school, and he has made many enemies because of his selfish approach to life.

Medical History:Has a scar under his right eye from a car crash when he was young, and slight nerve damage to this region has kept this eyelid half closed at all times.

Academic History:Cameron is a moderately successful student, but unremarkable by battle school standards. He excels in math and astrophysics, but struggles with literature and ancient history.

Military and Tactical:While Cameron is actually a decent strategist, his tendency towards overconfidence often means that he tries to do too much by himself, or with only his unit. He is incredibly prone to ignoring orders that he views as foolish, regardless of whether this is true or not. He also struggles to coordinate with other units, often preferring to isolate his toon from the rest of the army. This, combined with his headstrong nature, has cost him and his army several times in the battle room.

Disciplinary History:Has had several recorded incidents of insubordination since arriving at the battle school, as well as several fights, but nothing too noteworthy.

Battle Room Performance:Cameron is a decent soldier, a skilled shot who excels at entrenching himself deep in enemy territory and using the cover of stars to force the enemy into a forward position. His tendency to charge in, regardless of enemy numbers, usually results in him being frozen early in the battle.

Additional Comments:Shows enough tactical skill to warrant promotion to commander.Potentially toxic presence as a mere soldier in most armies.
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Student Name: Felix Breslin
Home of Origin: Reading, Pennsylvania
Current Army: Hornet
Nickname (If applicable): N/A
Probable Origin of Nickname: N/A
Self-identification (Per Monitor Reports): Felix
Physical Description-
Gender:Male
Current Age:10
Current Height: 4'8"
Current Weight: 87 lbs.
Hair Color: Brown
Eye Color: Green
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Family Description-
Father:James Breslin
Mother:Toni Ann Breslin
Siblings (If Applicable):
Siblings Enlisted (If Applicable):

Occupations of Parents-
Father: Store Owner
Mother: Accountant
Family Notes:

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Personality Profile: Felix is rather quiet. He speaks when necessary and usually not much aside. Although he can be slightly timid at first, when he commits to something he puts his whole backing behind it. His greatest trait is this determination.

Medical History: No significant medical information.

Academic History: Ranks with in the top 30%. Not the brightest but can certainly run with the best of them. Excels in language classes and has a knack for learning multiple languages.

Military and Tactical: As stated above, very timid at first. However, once he finds a goal he pursues it till it is obtained. Will charge head on if need by and act as a shield for his comrades.

Disciplinary History: No major incidents.

Battle Room Performance: Felix makes up for his timidness in his actual battle performance. He has an unnatural talent for aim. Is among the top 25% in regards to accuracy. However, his timidness does play a role in his lack of many kills.

Additional Comments: n/A
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Student Name: Jordan Williams
Home of Origin: Brentwood, New York
Current Army: Dragon
Nickname (If applicable): N/A
Probable Origin of Nickname: N/A
Self-identification (Per Monitor Reports): Jordan
Physical Description- African American
Gender:Male
Current Age:12
Current Height: 5'2"
Current Weight: 95 lbs.
Hair Color: Brown
Eye Color: Brown
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Family Description-
Father:Cameron Williams
Mother: Alisa Williams
Siblings (If Applicable):
Siblings Enlisted (If Applicable):

Occupations of Parents-
Father: Physics Teacher
Mother: Drama Teacher
Family Notes:

Most Current Assessment-

Personality Profile: Jordan is outgoing. He makes friends easily and knows how to organize people well. He is also quick thinking and always finds a solution to his problems quickly. He is best at knowing how to utilize his friends to achieve the goals involved in his solutions.

Medical History: No significant medical information.

Academic History: He does well in school but is in the top of the class in English.

Military and Tactical: He is a good strategist and improvises well. However, sometimes he doesn't see the big picture of the commander so improvises and ends up being in the wrong place.

Disciplinary History: No major incidents.

Battle Room Performance: His toon seperate at times to make the enemies think they are by themselves but then converge again to surround the enemy all following Jordan's hand signals. Despite Jordan's good performances in the battle room his toon is often outnumbered because of the poor performance of the rest of the army.

Additional Comments: He should be promoted to commander soon because of his good tactical ability and would know what the big picture always be.

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Um, not to be rude, but could you at least run the idea of you being a toon leader past me before you make that decision? It's kind of annoying when you just decide stuff like that for yourself without consulting me. Also, we're Hornet.
Also, being outnumbered due to "Poor performance by the rest of the army" is really not accurate at all. I'm sorry, but given that at the start of this storyline Hornet is supposed to be hanging around the top of the standings, saying that they're doing poorly is sort of ridiculous. Moreover, it's not up to you to determine how well the army is doing.
I'm not saying I don't want you to write for us, I'm just saying that you need to communicate with the rest of the army(and especially me, given that I'm the commander) before you make some of these decisions for yourself...

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sorry i just thought it would be cool to have dragon in it but have them be really bad because they had a "curse" on them before Ender
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Check halfwits for "why we don't have dragon army". That's beside the point, the point is that Hornet is not Dragon, and they aren't really bad, and since you posted this profile in Hornet, the implication is that you want to join THIS army. If that's not the case, don't post in our records. If you need help getting started, I'd be more than willing to help you out in the OOC section. Open up a new thread and Tirath, Toro and I will help you get off to a proper start.

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