Acceptable. It doesn't have to rhyme. It just has to have minor spelling changes, and a link.
Posted by Telperion the Silver (Member # 6074) on :
Posted by Raia (Member # 4700) on :
Haha, Hester, you pick up on things quickly.
Welcome to Hatrack, as I've said.
Posted by Bokonon (Member # 480) on :
Not bad at all. Though a "true" Dobie would more closely tie into the title (showing a picture of Maine doesn't show that we are all in it).
Good first effort though.
-Bok
Posted by HesterGray (Member # 7384) on :
quote: (showing a picture of Maine doesn't show that we are all in it)
Yes, I see your point. I'll try better next time.
Posted by Jay (Member # 5786) on :
And in your dobie you wouldn’t ask if it is. You want to be natural. Discus it after a few posts. I personally don’t understand the “you must have a link” rule. I think that depends on the dobie. But not bad at all.