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vwiggin
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From Wired

The baby’s blood type? Human, mostly.
- Orson Scott Card

Please, this is everything, I swear.
- Orson Scott Card

I saw, darling, but do lie.
- Orson Scott Card

Some of my other favorites:

I’m dead. I’ve missed you. Kiss … ?
- Neil Gaiman

Kirby had never eaten toes before.
- Kevin Smith

Easy. Just touch the match to
- Ursula K. Le Guin

Gown removed carelessly. Head, less so.
- Joss Whedon

Will this do (lazy writer asked)?
- Ken MacLeod

Sorry if this has been posted.
- [Smile]

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Steve ignores editor's word limit and
- Steven Meretzky

Dorothy: "F**k it, I'll stay here."
- Steven Meretzky

Computer, did we bring batteries? Computer?
- Eileen Gunn

From torched skyscrapers, men grew wings.
- Gregory Maguire

Epitaph: Foolish humans, never escaped Earth.
- Vernor Vinge

It cost too much, staying human.
- Bruce Sterling

We went solar; sun went nova.
- Ken MacLeod

K.I.A. Baghdad, Aged 18 - Closed Casket
- Richard K. Morgan

Heaven falls. Details at eleven.
- Robert Jordan

Life unfair, death impartial.
- Stone_Wolf_

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Hemingway once wrote a story in just six words ("For sale: baby shoes, never worn.") and is said to have called it his best work.
In my opinion, that's not a story, it's a suggestive image. Whenever a writer says that something that short is one of the greatest things ever written (or at least that he/she has written), I wonder if he/she is just rationalizing not being able to come up with something of decent length (e.g., when Gertrude Stein said of her "a rose is a rose is a rose" that it marked the first time in a few hundred years that a rose was really present in English literature).

I did find most of the six-word "stories" vivid and memorable for what they were. I was surprised to see a bunch by Steve Meretzky in there (scroll to the bottom). (Steve Meretzky wrote Planetfall and other classic text adventure computer games.)

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Leia: "Baby's yours." Luke: "Bad news…"
- Steven Meretzky

[ROFL]

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They don't all follow the "beginning/middle/end" prescription. But hey, let them eat cake.
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quote:
Originally posted by Omega M.:
In my opinion, that's not a story, it's a suggestive image. Whenever a writer says that something that short is one of the greatest things ever written (or at least that he/she has written), I wonder if he/she is just rationalizing not being able to come up with something of decent length (e.g., when Gertrude Stein said of her "a rose is a rose is a rose" that it marked the first time in a few hundred years that a rose was really present in English literature).

Given how many longer works both Hemingway and Stein came up with, I find it hard to believe that would be the reason.

(For my part, I'd say that writing short is much harder than writing long. The toughest part of writing isn't finding things to put in, it's taking things out. At least in my experience.)

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Of those posted, Card and Whedon's are the best.
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I saw, darling, but do lie.
- Orson Scott Card

I don't get it...

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"The hero saves the day, almost."
Dan Raven.

(Kat, someone got caught red handed beaking her darling's heart)

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quote:
Machine. Unexpectedly, I’d invented a time
- Alan Moore

[Big Grin]
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Oh! Thanks. [Smile]
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These are fun:

"Look, a Time Machine!"
"Where?"
"Yesterday."

Leia's furry son was not Han's.

John F. Kennedy, time traveling suicide.

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Hah, I like the last one of yours, Dan.
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Please forgive my refusal to forget.

---

He mistook her repugnance for indifference.

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Hamlet--To be or?
Fate--Not!

God loved everyone, but Herbert Gumbleschnitzle

The vulcan cried as logic died.

Sherlock, "School of vandals? Elementary Watson"

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From the minds of Shepherd and crystal-city:

Trees standing tall, strong, then him.

If only happy endings, would stay.

Steaming bowls, howling winds, where's Uncle?

Man on dog is pretty weird.

Riding cheetah, seeking castle, guessed movie?

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Their deaths annoyed her more than him.
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One word too many. You lose.

"Anchorman murdered. Film at eleven. ? AAAaahhhhh!!!"

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I love David Brin's. And Joss Whedon's is hilarious.

quote:
Temporal recursion. I'm dad and mom?
- David Brin

quote:
New genes demand expression -- third eye.
- Greg Bear

*note to self: read more Greg Bear*
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A few I wrote and attributed to others:

"Evil is coming! Let's fight pointlessly."
— George R. R. Martin

Nine books to make dragons mate?
— Robin Hobb

"It wasn't a game? I'm horrible."
— Orson Scott Card

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Good ones Rat!
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I wonder if this 6 word short story thing is inspired by, "We came, we saw, we conquered."

That is my favorite 6 word story, and I think it has all the elements of a basic story.

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She forgot that she should grieve.
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"Deja vu, dear." "Cripes, Not again!"
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[ROFL]

These are great. And hard. I'mma try to think of some.

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My own, from OSC literature:

"A child with powers? How Original!"

"Dysfunctional family background, still wants kids"

[Hat] to Mr. Card, keep giving us more books!

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Knife-edge bad place for dancing.

Oracle: "Oedipus, your will be done."

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Intergalactic spiders live in our sun.

Mars mission six weeks too late.

Chef's specialty is chicken ala regrets.

The bullet not fired is sacred.

Oh crap! Robots have feelings too.

Armagheddon suprisingly good time for clog-dancing.

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Died October 31, 2006, 2008, 1745
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More six-word versions of Orson Scott Card novels. See if you can name the books [Smile]

1. They mutilate, but plant no trees.

2. The alien calls, my will fails.

3. My body disgusts me. Die, Anderson!

4. What is Old Slavonic for "bitch"?

5. Hate the haunting, love the ghost.

6. Pain has returned. Let me explain.

7. I married Joseph Smith. You too?

8. Computer's busted. Time for a war.

9. CENSORED! That book's not out yet.

10. Someone screwed with my songbird's brain.

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Mom, a major's here for you.
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1. Speaker for the dead
2. Wyrms
3. Ender's Shadow
4. Shadow of the Giant?
5. Homebody
6. Hart's Hunt?
7. Woman of Destiny/Saints
8. Ender's Game?
9. Empire
10. Songmaster

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quote:
Originally posted by lem:
I wonder if this 6 word short story thing is inspired by, "We came, we saw, we conquered."

That is my favorite 6 word story, and I think it has all the elements of a basic story.

I thought it was "I came, I saw, I conquered", no? And the original is only 3 words.

The shortest science fiction story I ever saw was only 3 words, actually. It was called "The Sign at the End of the Universe", and it consisted of the words "This End Up" printed upside-down.

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6 is Worthing Saga.
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6. is The Worthing Saga.
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Beat ya. [Wink] And check that out, blazed right past 5000. Hmm.
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[Razz]
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4. Enchantment
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My bullet lodged between his hearts.

Lightening danced on his left shoulder.

Her voice cracked stone and hearts

She lied. He died. She cried.

Cupid slept. Destined love died unborn.

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Puppy
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You guys are still missing #8 and #3, I believe ...
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8. Children of the Mind
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Puppy
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Nope.

Though to be fair, my dad missed that one, too [Smile] Must not be clear enough.

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#8, pick your book from the Homecoming series... probably the second.

(I think it's obvious just can't remember precisely which book...)

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Actually, yeah, it could be either of the first two. I was thinking of Memory of Earth, though, where the idea of a busted computer leading to war was introduced.
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#3 CotM?
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The Ender series isn't the only one with people named Anderson.
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Yeah but wasn't #2 (of homecoming series) where they actually started fighting on a more global scale? (I can't keep those titles straight for some reason)

[ October 25, 2006, 04:13 PM: Message edited by: BannaOj ]

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re: #3 You've got to have the character die before the story is over.... are you sure we are talking about your dad's books? [Wink]

AJ

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Sure, but my point is that #3 is not a book from the Enderverse.

[Smile]

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quote:
Though to be fair, my dad missed that one, too
*laugh* That is heartening.
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