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Posted by Batman (Member # 4211) on :

I need critiques from anyone willing, por favor.

I'm sending off an excerpt of my novel to Phobos Books and I want to tighten it up as much as possible. It's not too long. (4.3k words.)

Email me at icedragon60@aol.com or put your email here if you're willing to do it. Also, if possible, I'm hoping to send out the excerpt mid-week, so if the critiques could be sent back to me tonight/tomorrow/(tuesday at the latest) that would be great.

Thanks to everyone for their help!

-CM

Posted by LockeTreaty (Member # 5627) on :

My critque is in the mail Batman. [Smile]

Posted by Black Mage (Member # 5800) on :

Anthropo2605@yahoo.com

Posted by Batman (Member # 4211) on :

Received and sent. Thanks everyone for your help.