comments, criticisms are happily accepted...
Posted by Polio (Member # 6479) on :
It's a very pretty melody, more love-song than unhappy-boyfriend-angst in my opinion. The guitar is very good, although I'm not too much of an expert on it. Some advice for your singing: keep your tongue down and against your front bottom teeth, especially when singing "ah" and "I" sounds; also, when "ah"ing and "I"ing, try opening your mouth more up and down instead of wide, and round your "o"s more. Another thing to keep in mind is to spring off the consonants onto the vowels, and throw in the ending of the word at the very end, which is quite hard to explain, it would sound kind of like, "trYYYYYYYYYY-ing" and make sure it's not a "ying" at the end but rather an "ing". I hope this is all constructive criticism and I don't come off sounding like the world's biggest narcissist, your voice is great and it's just some technical advice, and the melody is beautiful.
Posted by BYuCnslr (Member # 1857) on :
I rather like it, the melody and lyrics are very good. As a smidge of helpful criticism as well, though it may just be the mics that you're using, but enunciate a smidgen more between words, though you do enunciate better than many groups I've heard. :: bookmarks and looks forward to more :: Satyagraha
Posted by Rudolph (Member # 3236) on :
thank you both very much for the replies, i'm glad you enjoyed it!
Posted by Zotto! (Member # 4689) on :
Er, I'd give you a critique, but it's refusing to download. *will try again later*
Posted by Rudolph (Member # 3236) on :
you can also stream it if that would work...
Posted by Rudolph (Member # 3236) on :
**cough**bump**cough**
Posted by Rudolph (Member # 3236) on :
soooo.....
Posted by Polio (Member # 6479) on :
(((Rudolph))) Patience, little bird... Reindeer...