Well, fingers really. In honor of my 100th post ever on Hatrack (Small accomplishment, but more talking than I've done on the internet in a good 6 years), I am posting a story I wrote about a year ago. I sent it in to the WOTF contest during the summer (I did not win, no surprise there, this is the first story I've ever finished, kinda). There's really no plot or point to it. I was just sitting down one day, came up with an idea, and wrote the whole thing in an hour. I did some editing, then let it sit for a year, edited a little more and decided to just shut my eyes and submit something. I wanted to send something in to WOTF for a while, but never had the guts to just do it. So I sent this in. I'd like to actually improve it, maybe get it to have a plot, but with the subject matter being what it is (As you'll find out reading the first paragraph), it's hard to figure out anything really good.
Most of the people that have read this told me it was good, but I'd like to get more opinions. Anyway.