Silent, swift, glowing Flitting between the planets Serenity flies.
Leader of rebels, He is broken deep inside. Bad, in the Latin.
Second in command, Loyal, devoted, and true Beware her pinky.
Now he sees the stars, Met the woman of his dreams Flight school was worth it.
Bubbly and friendly, And when it comes to engines She bested Bester.
Muscles, thuggery. He is Vera dangerous. A hero, to some.
Grace and elegance, She’s a woman of repute On this firefly.
To save his sister, He destroyed the life he had. He found her broken.
No one yet can see The method in her madness. The damage runs deep
He preaches the truth, But he is not who he seems. That ain’t a shepherd.
In the quiet dark, She shelters nine from the cold. Peace be unto them.
Posted by Mr.Funny (Member # 4467) on :
My sister is an Absolutely cool genius Her poetry rocks
[Originally: My sister absolutely rocks. And is a freakin' genius.
That is all.]
[ September 28, 2005, 01:57 AM: Message edited by: Mr.Funny ]
Posted by Enigmatic (Member # 7785) on :
"Grenades cost extra." Jayne has all of the best lines. "I could get nekkid."
Posted by Teshi (Member # 5024) on :
I love it! I love the way you wove lines from the show into the poem. My only question is why did you put the stanzas in this particular order? "That ain't a shepherd" seems like awfully abrupt way to end the list bit of the poem, is all.
Posted by Shigosei (Member # 3831) on :
I put them in a semi-random order. How do you think they should be arranged?
Posted by Mr.Funny (Member # 4467) on :
No one else posts now This is very saddening Firefly, or die
Posted by Beren One Hand (Member # 3403) on :
"He is Vera dangerous."
Oh yeah, I'm so going to use that IRL. Posted by Telperion the Silver (Member # 6074) on :
"Leader of rebels, He is broken deep inside. Bad, in the Latin."
Very cool.
Posted by Enigmatic (Member # 7785) on :
Inara is hot But when you come down to it, I like Kaylee more.
Posted by The Pixiest (Member # 1863) on :
Simon N Kalyee The 'verses cutest couple I wish they would kiss.
Posted by Enigmatic (Member # 7785) on :
Three hours to go I can focus on naught else My Jayne hat is on
Posted by Narnia (Member # 1071) on :
I just cannot wait I have my brown coat ready It's almost Friday!
Posted by Enigmatic (Member # 7785) on :
Did you see that bit? And the thing with the cool stuff! This movie so rocks!
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