"Name's Bang. I was there when the world ended. I feel sorta responsible. So I'm tryin' to make the world a better place for us decent folks.
"There ya go..., my origin story.
"I'm driving down the Mississippi to some small town named Calvera.... They got a problem with an otherworldly infestation. Elves or somethin'."
Posted by KarlEd (Member # 571) on :
Dark, but not bad.
Posted by Storm Saxon (Member # 3101) on :
I like it, but if he made his story arcs a little longer, I have to admit I would like it a lot more.
I'm hoping right now is just preamble, and we'll see a little meatier plot, shortly.
I'm glad you like it, though, KarlEd.
Posted by MightyCow (Member # 9253) on :
Pretty good stuff. I like the style and the story, and they go well together. I'd like something a little meatier too, but short and good beats long and drawn out.