it's a driving hard rock tune, we are trying to make it more universal.
Your mission: come up with one new word for both blanks.
"10 years gone by still on the run thanks for the memories, so much fun we fly sideways on a straight path headed nowhere, really ________ fast _______ fast, we fly farther"
already discarded entries=
really f*&^%ing fast (the original) really really fast really goddamn fast really freakin' fast
thanks! (edited for context)
[ January 06, 2009, 07:04 PM: Message edited by: RivalOfTheRose ]
Posted by Trent Destian (Member # 11653) on :
kinda; not so; gradually; relatively;
Honestly, anything you put in there, it seems like a pretty flat lyric. You may want to change more than just the one word. And without the rest of the song it'll be difficult to insert a word matching the context of your little ballad there.
Posted by Lisa (Member # 8384) on :
And yes, context would help. A lot.
Posted by RivalOfTheRose (Member # 11535) on :
thanks so much, and I edited it to add the preceding words.
Posted by ElJay (Member # 6358) on :
Running.
Posted by Noemon (Member # 1115) on :
Yeah, "running" works.
Posted by Sean Monahan (Member # 9334) on :
Running doesn't work for me. Or, at least, if it's used, the last line needs to change.
"Running fast, we fly farther"
Are we running or flying?
EDIT: Or, perhaps, switch the occurrences of "really" and "running" in the last two lines:
"headed nowhere, running really fast Really fast, we fly farther"
Posted by scifibum (Member # 7625) on :
I like "really ripping fast, time blows past, we fly farther" although I question ending a line with "We fly farther." "Farther we fly" sounds a lot better to my ear.