This is topic Q:What procedures did the great masters use for rewrites? PS I'm in tears over this?? in forum Open Discussions About Writing at Hatrack River Writers Workshop.
I must have this rewrite done and ready to record the audio book by Aug 1st 2005.
How do I do this?
I sit and obsess over each sentence of the initial draft and am moving slower than molasses on its completion?
How is this done!
I've finished so many stories but never gone all the way with a ready for the public rewritten, fixed up dressed up baby.
This story to me is magic but how do I frikkin finish it.
Buwahhhh, Buwaahhhh!
Are there any books that outline how the great masters did a rewrite? By the numbers? as in...
1. William sat down. 2. Counted paragraphs. 3. Chanted secret song. 4. spun around three times throwing salt over shoulder...
How is it done?
I've got to finish this well before Aug 1.
Help me....
Help me....
Buwaaaaaahh... buwahhhhh....
:| Muogin
Posted by MaryRobinette (Member # 1680) on :
Well. None of the great masters do it the same.
Here's what I would do if I were you. Read it outloud. If you stumble over a word, stop and fix it because that's a signal that a sentence is awkward. Otherwise leave it alone! You are over-thinking this.
Posted by Kickle (Member # 1934) on :
"Revising Fiction" by David Madden is a great book which uses revisions done by masters as examples. The book shows that each writer has to find not only his own style of writing, but revision as well. By the way, many master writers ended up revising their stories after publication. I do agree with Mary Robinette, don't over-think --give it a break and then go back with a clear mind. I just totally ruined a draft by over-thinking and it was not only a waste of time, but also emotionally draining.
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Posted by wbriggs (Member # 2267) on :
Mary's right. Obsessing over each line will, I think, make each line wooden.
Congratulations on getting this opportunity! Wow!
Posted by calavari (Member # 2631) on :
Stephen King also wrote a book titled "On Writing" and there's a section for revising. He basically just says to put it down for a long time, and then just read it. Course, you don't have the time he took. He takes 2 months, which is long enough to forget that you wrote it yourself and to be able to read it like a reader. Then take out the things you stumble on, like Mary Robinette said to do. Some advice that he gives is to 'kill your children' those precious sequences that you loved to write but just do nothing for the story except slow it down. It's a really good book, very helpful.