Is there any special ruling on who the pronoun should be assigned once the reader understands it refers to a specific character? And what about using pronouns when the conversation covers two characters of the same gender? Which character should be called he(or she depending on the situation) and which by their actual name? Does it matter if it is switched when starting a new paragraph or changed in the paragraph if it's obvious who is who?
I find myself running into these situations quite frequently when I write and would definitely like to know the rules when it comes to pronoun use. Any advice is appreciated.
The second person pronoun you is in a class of complications all by itself.
First person pronouns are almost exclusively in a stand-alone relationship, as are the expletive usage of it (It's just the way it is), the relative pronoun what (As it is, is what it is.) and interogatory pronouns, what, who, which, and sometimes the colloquial usage of they.
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John slapped joe on the back. He collapsed to his knees from the force of the blow.
In this case you read "he" to mean Joe, partly--I think--because Joe was the last referenced character, and also--if not mostly--because of the context. We just don't naturally assume that John will fall to his knees from the force of slapping Joe's back.
I don't worry about it to much, trying instead to just let it flow naturally.
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The second person pronoun you is in a class of complications all by itself.
Agreed. I think the official rule for that one is "don't". And that includes giving orders to the reader, any form of "we" or "us", etc.
Of course, all rules are meant to be broken.
Again, if it's not clear in context, the "he" will want to refer to the nearest proper noun. So, you can't simply establish to whom "he" refers, because it will likely change.
For instance:
Jesse grabbed the bottle. He opened it and poured a glass for Adam. "Here," he said. "Try it." since it's in the same paragraph, we can assume this follows the conventions of dialogue and is therefore Jesse who is speaking.
Adam swirled the wine. A foul stench emanated from the thick liquid. He put the glass down and scowled at Jesse. In this paragraph, Adam is the established character. Therefore, "he" no longer refers to Jesse but to Adam.
In the case Zero brought up, it's clear in context whom "he" refers to. Who else would collapse from the blow but the person who was struck? Be careful of that construction, though, because it can be confusing:
Jesse poured two glasses of wine and gave one to Adam. He took a sip. In this case, it's not clear whom "he" refers to. It could be Adam, but it could also be Jesse, who has a glass of wine in his hands.
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http://www.sparknotes.com/writing/style/topic_150.html
http://ace.acadiau.ca/english/grammar/pronoun.htm
http://www.buowl.boun.edu.tr/students/grammar/writing%20guides/pronouns.htm
The rule seems to be, if in doubt, disambiguate.
Cheers,
Pat
The following is an example of what I'm running into with my novella. In this example, the last time I use Silas's name is because saying "he" just didn't sound right. Would "he" work in this case or is it better to just leave it alone? I should add that the "she" in this example is in reference to a mare that "he" is leading to the ring. "skittish bay colt" and "the horse" are the same animal:
[He called her a dozen derogatory names on his way to the ring where he met Silas coming out. He waited for Silas to calm a skittish bay colt before Silas led the horse by.]
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[He called her a dozen derogatory names on his way to the ring where he met Silas coming out Since he waits for Silas don't know if we need to know he met Silas coming out. He waited for Silas to calm a skittish bay colt before Silas led the horse by.Could be: He waited for Silas to calm a skittish bay colt and lead it by. Or, perhaps: He waited until Silas calmed a skittish bay colt and lead it by.