Hi! I'm hoping for some feedback on a new fantasy story that I've just finished, about 6,800 words. I must warn any potential readers that there is a BRIEF, but graphic depiction of violence towards the end. As usual, I will return any feedback, but please bear with me as it may take me a week or so to return the favor.
Posted by Rahl22 (Member # 1411) on :
Where's my 13 lines, and a brief description?!
Posted by SiliGurl (Member # 922) on :
Rahl22,
Hi... Unless the rules for this board have changed, I've been able to post this simple plea for help and kind members have posted their email addys and expressed a willingness to trade reviews. As to a synopsis... Well, it's a fantasy piece that deals with undiscovered country for me, and I think it's a pretty intriguing concept and play on old themes.
If anyone's interested in offering feedback on my story, LMK. Again, I promise to return the favor!
[This message has been edited by SiliGurl (edited May 26, 2003).]
Posted by Rahl22 (Member # 1411) on :
Oh, I don't mean to come off as rude!
I'm just spoiled I guess; used to people posting the intros to their stories.
I'd definitely say that I'd read it, but I'm not sure when I'd get around to it! Sorry...
Posted by teddyrux (Member # 1595) on :
Send it to me and I'll give you a review. teddyruxdoll@email.msn.com
Posted by Hildy9595 (Member # 1489) on :
Always up for one of your stories, Siligurl! Please feel free to send to hildy9595@aol.com. I'll get to it as quickly as possible Posted by Balthasar (Member # 5399) on :
I think I can find some time this week. Send it on down.
Posted by Alias (Member # 1645) on :
