Hatrack River Writers Workshop: The Perfect Students 269 words

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Posted by limo (Member # 2470) on :

very short story, which starts like this...

They were the perfect students, Judith thought, as she gazed at the rows of mute unblinking faces. Perfect, but somehow unnerving. Each year they came then, after a few months, left to go to jobs or University, or so she supposed. She repositioned the white board and in thick, dark pen wrote another line of grammar.
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Any bites?

Posted by benskia (Member # 2422) on :

Yey.
I'll read it.
Not quite hooked yet, but its got potential.

Posted by mikemunsil (Member # 2109) on :

I will read.

Posted by jimmyjazz951 (Member # 2443) on :

I would be happy to read it.