This came from Flash Challenge #3. It aspires to be literary fiction, but I need to do some heavy work to get it there. The whole thing is 148 words, and I would like readers for the whole thing.
--Mel
First 2 lines:
quote:The moon shines on the toppled towers. The buildings lean at crazy angles; some have succumbed to gravity and collapsed.
[This message has been edited by MCameron (edited April 28, 2005).]
Posted by EverGlowingHaze (Member # 2525) on :
Sure, I'll take a look at it.
Posted by MCameron (Member # 2391) on :
On the way! Thanks
--Mel
Posted by Beth (Member # 2192) on :
Oooh, I remember this one from the challenge. I'll read.
Posted by MCameron (Member # 2391) on :
Thanks Beth, sent.
--Mel
Posted by yanos (Member # 1831) on :
I'll take a loik if you are interested.
Posted by MCameron (Member # 2391) on :
