A couple of weeks ago, I posted the first 13 lines of my book. I am now on chapter 9, and every few days go back to try to catch errors, and add things where I quickly skimmed to get the action down first. My question is, who would be willing to read the first two chapters, about 6 pages, and let me know what you think about how the story starts? I may ask you to clarify somethings. I will say, this is a "mature" story. It is the story of a woman who has survived abuse, and goes on to create a very special rescue for other women and children. Really the first four chapters set up the rescue organization.
Thanks for all of your help, Abby
Posted by Elan (Member # 2442) on :
I would be willing to read if you would be willing to give me a couple of weeks for critique. The month of July is extremely busy for me and I have several projects I MUST finish up first. Be sure to put HATRACK in the subject header when you email to me. The last email from a Hatracker I missed had a subject header of "SOFTIES" and I thought it was spam about erectile dysfunction.
The last email from a Hatracker I missed had a subject header of "SOFTIES" and I thought it was spam about erectile dysfunction. 