Hatrack River Writers Workshop: Would anyone be prepared to read a chapter?

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Posted by Max Masterson (Member # 4799) on :

Hi, I've got a chapter or two done that I'm quite happy with but have noone to read it and give their opinion. So was wondering whether anybody would be prepared to have a look at it and give me their reaction please?

Posted by tigertinite (Member # 4803) on :

I would love to read your first chapter. My critisms tend to be more coherence and point of view related, but I can spot a few grammatical errors.

Posted by BruceWayne1 (Member # 4604) on :

ditto Max, I'd be happy too.

have you checked out criter yet or Online writer's workshop? both places can get you crits on your work, provided you are willing to crit other's work.

Posted by kings_falcon (Member # 3261) on :

Send it to me. I'm a bit slow on crits - probably a two week turn around - but they tend to be detailed. I'll send you part of Falcon later today.