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Posted by joelman42 (Member # 5226) on :
 
Have any of you read "From the Corner of His Eye" by Dean Koontz? I love the way he opens it. Here are the first 13 lines:


Bartholomew Lampion was blinded at the age of three, when surgeons reluctantly removed his eyes to save him from a fast-spreading cancer; but although eyeless, Barty regained his sight when he was thirteen. This sudden ascent from a decade of darkness into the glory of light was not brought about by the hands of a holy healer. No celestial trumpets announced the restoration of his vision, just as none had announced his birth. A roller coaster had something to do with his recovery, as did a seagull. And you can't discount the importance of Barty's profound desire to make his mother proud of him before her second death. The first time she died was the day Barty was born. January 6, 1965.

By this point, I was like, "Ok, WHAT? Back up." But he doesn't. You don't figure out what he's talking about until the very end of the book, when the story arc comes all the way around. It's an excellent book.
 


Posted by Verloren (Member # 3916) on :
 
While I did think the opening was interesting and I was glad he came out and said what was happening (in other books of his I have read, he tries to create suspense by withholding crucial information), I found the book quite formulaic and trite.

I guessed everything that was going to happen long before it did.

And the ending was just too "neat" for my taste.

I did like how he talked about other dimensions and stuff, and I was glad there were not any super-intelligent dogs.

Of course, this is just my opinion. I have liked other books he has written (even ones with super-intelligent dogs).

-V
 


Posted by joelman42 (Member # 5226) on :
 
I liked the book for the most part. My biggest complaint was the villain - he was despicable, but he was also kind of pathetic.

Oh, yes, the super-intelligent dogs are always fun.

Which other books of his did you like?
 


Posted by HuntGod (Member # 2259) on :
 
The Bad Place is one of my favorites by Koontz.

Nothing like four testicled aryans named Candy to creep me out...
 


Posted by InarticulateBabbler (Member # 4849) on :
 
I liked The Bad Place too. Coldfire was excellent, too.
 
Posted by debhoag (Member # 5493) on :
 
the opening sounds like a prayer for owen meany, by the world according to garp guy. Do you think superintelligent dogs pan books about superintelligent humans?
 


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