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Topic: The Toppled Towers

MCameron
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This came from Flash Challenge #3. It aspires to be literary fiction, but I need to do some heavy work to get it there. The whole thing is 148 words, and I would like readers for the whole thing.

--Mel

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The moon shines on the toppled towers. The buildings lean at crazy angles; some have succumbed to gravity and collapsed.

[This message has been edited by MCameron (edited April 28, 2005).]

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EverGlowingHaze
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Sure, I'll take a look at it.

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MCameron
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On the way! Thanks

--Mel

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Beth
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Oooh, I remember this one from the challenge. I'll read.

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MCameron
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Thanks Beth, sent.

--Mel

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yanos
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I'll take a loik if you are interested.

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MCameron
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Sent. Thanks.

--Mel

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