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Thought this might be fun. Since we've got so many posts that are flying off topic, I thought maybe it'd be good to start a thread discussing something near and dear to writing -- the perfect phrase that just says it all. Not that we need that all the time (writing would be just a bunch of aphorisms and platitudes if that were the case), but sometimes a quick phrase does what a dozen pages could not.
I'll give you the one I ran across today. Victor Hugo in Les Miserables is trying to convey the concept that a certain woman is not very maternal. His line:
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Ursula LeGuin is always striking me with her beautiful apt and poetic phrases.
In The Left Hand of Darkness after they skint and threw out the pesthry carcasses she described how the scavenger animals would come eat the remains and then "lick clean the bloody snow".
I liked her line in The Lathe of Heaven that the reason nobody had bothered to tear down an old interstate highway abutment was because it was "so big, so ugly, and so useless as to be to the American eye invisible"
Later when George and Heather begin to make love she explained that, "Love doesn't just lie there, like a stone; it has to be made, like bread."
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Like bread? Yuk. I wonder what her opinions are, really, about sex. I have no desire to be punched down and made into rolls!!
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Oh, come now. You've never heard of a roll in the hay?
I know a good quote,
quote: Your contention that the Constitution is in some sense law must rest upon some obscure philosophic principle with which I am unfamiliar.
Hmm, maybe the second paragraph of Article six, "This Constitution, and the laws of the United States which shall be made in the pursuance thereof, and all treaties made, or which shall be made, under the authority of the United States, shall be the supreme law of the land,; and the judges in every State shall be bound thereby, anything in the Constitution or laws of any state to the contrary notwithstanding."
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You're from the city, aren't you? Ever tried a roll in the hay? That's darn poky stuff! And rolling in it is not as fun as they say it is!
Another favorite quote:
"And the goblins - they had not really been there at all? They were only the phantoms of cowardice and unbelief? One healthy human impulse would dispel them? Men like the Wilcoxes, or President Roosevelt, would say yes. Beethoven know better."
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Actually, I have rolled in hay. Just not 'in the hay. It's some kind of silly metaphor for passionate and ill considered... well, anyway, I agree about hay itself. Loved it as a kid, but quickly realized that hives, wheezing, and sneezing fits were somehow associated with hay.
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Okay, I can't think of anything else to say about rolling in the hay, so I'm taking this back to the topic of good lines.
quote: A person in a fit of rage can be restored to good humor and a person in the heat of passion can be restored to good cheer, but a state that has perished cannot be revived and the dead cannot be brought back to life.
You would think that I would learn to spell, wouldn't you?
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I recall reading a rather well turned phrase in a short story last winter. We are given a quick character sketch of a minor character on an expedition with this observation: He was bound to expose the team to the kinds of danger only morons can summon.
quote:The Civil War ended, and Sherman's strategy of indirect attack had gained the victory... the march though Georgia and the Carolinas destroyed the South's will to continue the war.... But...If the purpose of war is to bring about a more perfect peace, then Sherman failed miserably. The memory of the damage that he and his men did was passed from parent to child...for a century after the Civil War...an enduring folk memory of wanton havoc that embittered the Southern people...
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Come on you guys, you gave this subject up too soon. There must be more great lines out there. It's been so long since I actually had time to read a whole book that I can't think of any myself. That's driving me crazy.
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The power to cause pain is the only power that matters, the power to kill and destroy, because if you can't kill then you are always subject to those who can, and nothing and no one will ever save you.
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"It's just a stupid rabbit, you silly old fool!"
"It's not just any rabbit! That's the most vicious, foul tempered rabbit you've ever laid eyes on. It's got teeth like... and it can jump about... well, look at the bones!"
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Well! I don't feel so bad about posting a line from a movie anymore! But really, Survivor - the killer rabbit?!
And personally, I prefer:
"This you know- the years travel fast, and time after time I done the tell. But this ain't one body's tell, its the tell of us all. And you gotta listen it, and 'member, 'cause what you hears today, you gotta tell the newborn tomorra'. I's lookin' behind us now - into history back..."
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You should have fallen in love with a happy man if you wanted happiness. But no, you had to fall for the breathtaking beauty of pain...
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Jackonus, I'm afraid you created a perfect platform for launching us into flight. I'm not sure this group is capable of staying strictly on course.
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I think I will insult everyone here by being perfectly serious. Which is very brave of me; I'm usually very careful to only offend people I know.
My favorite lines -- from a Spanish poet, Octavio Paz, these last few lines of his poem "Fable"
A tree grew in the palm of your hand And that tree laughed sang prophesied Its divinations filled the air with wings There were simple miracles called birds Everything was for everyone Everyone was for everything There was only one huge word with no back to it, A word like a sun One day it broke into tiny pieces They were the words of the language we now speak Pieces that will never come together Broken mirrors where the world sees itself shattered
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a four-wheel-drive huh? How about wings. You see more when you're aloft. How about a four-wheel-drive with wings. We do go places don't we
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Oh Kirti, what a wonderful poem! Who tranlated it? I've never read translated poetry I liked that wasn't translated by someone who was a great poet themselves.
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I hate to even bring this up, but has anyone here ever read the "Soliloquy of the Spanish Cloister"? It's too long to put it in as a 'good line', but I really like it.
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I've read them both and I must say of the two I prefer "My Last Duchess". However I would rather read "By The Fireside".
A turn, and we stand in the heart of things; The woods are round us, heaped and dim; From slab to slab how it slips and springs, The thread of water single and slim, Through the ravage some torrent brings!