In mid August an agent requested my full ms off a query later. I sent it, in a couple weeks they got back to me saying they were almost done, loved it, and wanted a synopsis to share with other members of the agency. I sent the synopsis, and they responded saying they would get back to me ASAP. That will be 2 months ago tomorrow.

On the agency website it says to give them 2 months for a full. Meanwhile, I am going nuts. So now the two month mark has arrived and I am allowed to send a communication their way. What would be the best format for this? We've had email conversation so I am assuming this would be acceptable, but what should I say? Does anyone have any pointers? I totally appreciate it.

Thanks a gazillion.

K

Since you've had personal email contact with them, I would probably stick to that (unless they have guidelines stating otherwise). You could always consider asking your agent what's appropriate too.

I would follow a query letter format, keep it professional, but since you've had personal contact with them before you might be able to be a little bit more familiar (I'm no expert on that, I'm assuming someone else will come along who knows more than me).

Hello <person>
I just wanted to check in with you and see if you had a chance to share my <story title> synopsis with others in your agency, and if so, what their reaction was. (I'm sure you could word this much better, but aim for 1-2 sentences.)

I look forward to hearing from you. Thank you so much for your time.

I think I'm too worried I won't get a response or something. I'll let you know how it goes.