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Meredith
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Not to hijack the other thread. Here's another, somewhat unexpected way, that writing short stories can help with your novels.

This has been my experience with my current WIP. It actually started out to be a short story. Since I didn't have any brilliant short story ideas and I was writing it more for the practice anyway, I started from a fairy tale--Toads and Diamonds. Most of you have probably never heard of it and it doesn't matter. Even I have trouble finding the elements of the fairy tale in there any more.

First I deconstructed the fairy tale. I kept the family dynamic of the mother and two daughters. I ditched the fairy and brought in another character that I had played around with in another failed short story. (He ended up changing a lot.) I changed the gifts around so it wasn't what gift each girl recieved that made the difference, but how they used their gifts.

Things sort of morphed and grew as I worked on it and when I finished it was 30K words. Not a short story. So I set it aside. But I really liked the characters that I had created for this story and I wanted to give them a better chance. So, I would take it out and fiddle with it from time to time.

One morning I woke up and had the answer. I needed to tell the male character's story, too. Well, that was easier said than done. I tried several things that didn't work. I'd get a chapter or two and then it would just trail off.

Finally, by chance, I read a book that also has a broken main character (THE CURSE OF CHALION, Lois McMaster Bujold) and seeing how she handled bringing in the story of how he got to be broken, even as he was healing, gave me some new ideas.

Now I'm only one new chapter and the editing of three existing chapters away from writing THE END on the first draft.

I'm actually looking at another failed short story (15K words) as possibly my next project. That one clearly has a lot of story that takes place after the current ending.

So, you never know where a story might lead.


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Cheyne
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I submitted a 120 word story introduction for a class I took. I wrote those 120 words in about 45 minutes on the day it was due. The story idea was so compelling that my teacher insisted that I write the story (The assignment was to practise creating hooks and was not necessarily meant to produce a story). A week later I had written 30 pages of story and had not even finished intoducing the full conflict. Today that short story is sixty thousand plus words of contiguous story and about fifteen thousand more in bits and pieces floating somewhere in the story's future. My original short story idea was by itself too big for the genre, but as I wrote more and more new ideas came and almost derailed the original.
Long story short (or short story long) I have a novel and most likely an extended series that all came from a throw away assignment.
PS Almost two years and 70,000 words later, the 120 words from that assignment are still there at the beginning.

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Merlion-Emrys
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The 20something k novella I wrote a couple years back started as a short story.

And I'm familiar with Toads and Diamonds (I use to regularly check out the variously coloured fairy books from the library) in several different versions in fact.


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Owasm
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As I have been writing short stories, I sometimes find that a short story can't be told in a reasonable amount of space.

I wrote a story of a kidnapped sorceress and had an ending in mind, but as I wrote, the thing sort of exploded on me. So now in my WIP there are three or four of these projects that should be expanded into novel length to make the concept work.

I often find my problem is I have a story that's about 50,000 words and that's just too short of adult fiction... so I have to expand the story by adding elements all over the place.

The first novel I wrote (unpublished) started out as a fantasy and I ended up tacking on SF on both ends creating a much larger story arc.

I find I don't have the patience or the time to take an exploded short story and turn it into a novel. I'd rather just set it aside for a later time and concentrate on current projects. I guess that is part of what WIP is all about.

[This message has been edited by Owasm (edited October 26, 2009).]


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Architectus
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My first novel Bending Nature started as a short story. I loved the character so much, the novel was easy to write. I finished in a month. 75,000 words.

The next novel was based on an old screenplay I wrote. The third I had the whole novel idea already, same with the forth, and now the fifth.

I have several novel ideas lined up, and I keep getting more, so I don't believe I will ever get to write all the novels I want to.

The method I use to come up with plots is

http://www.youtube.com/user/architectus777#grid/user/92B3E146AB7D132F


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Kathleen Dalton Woodbury
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If you've ever written a short story that had a "surprise ending" (along the lines of "now you know what's really going on"), you may have actually written the first chapter of a novel--because now that the main character knows what's really going on, the rest of the story could be about what the main character does about it.
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genevive42
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My novel that's sitting, waiting for some serious world building, started as a short story a long time ago. It's a finished first draft that I will return to after NaNo and probably after the first of the year.

I had another short story that turned into a 32,000 word novella.

I generally take the approach that I'll write a story as long as it needs to be and sometimes they get away from me.


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