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Teraen
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Ok, I'm gonna give this a try, because I have a few chapters I gotta write from this guy's perspective.

In front of you he reclines on immaculate plush cushions. His body is fit and muscular, not an ounce of fat on him. He is exquisitely groomed. Hair is clean cut, face is shaven. His body is wrapped in a fine silk toga and a beautiful young woman, obviously his slave, is holding a dish of cured meats and cheeses at the side of the small stone table in front of him.

"I don't usually ask where you found out about my services. But you do need to know that I am not cheap." He takes a bite, and gestures to the woman to leave. Once she is gone, he takes a swig of wine and leans forward. "I need to know three things before taking a job: why you want them killed, how much you can pay, and why you don't do it yourself."


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Why do you care about 'why' if I'm willing to pay you? Would you refuse the job if I didn't tell you?

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Teraen
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"Maybe, if you'd have hired me when I first started, I would have been motivated only by your gold.But now, yes, I need more than some pretended justification for slaying another. How else do I know if it is worthy of my time? Look around. Do you see my villa? Do you see my slaves? I do not need your money. And besides, a professional of my standards requires a better motive that mere lucre. If you are some coward there are plenty of gang thugs who would do what you need at a much lower price. Of course, if you want it done right..."
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Have you ever killed anyone famous? A celebrity? Politician?
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Teraen
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He grins. "I'm sure you understand that I must take a certain amount of... discretion... in these things. It wouldn't be ethical to reveal my former jobs, and naming past successes would most certainly implicate some who would rather remain anonymous.

"But sit, have some wine. I also know you wouldn't be sitting here if you didn't have the proper attitude about these things. You need to know if I can actually deliver on what I claim. Let's see... Celebrities? Politicians? I suppose I could tell you about Gaius Publius Sulpicus. He was a Tribune, years ago. Something of a politician AND a celebrity. But then, aren't most Tribunes? As long as they pretend to oppose whatever the Senate wants, the plebs will parade them through the streets and give reverence more befitting of the gods.

"Sulpicus was different than most. The plebs honestly believed he was looking out for their interests. Needless to say, he provoked the ire of more than a few Senators with his constant vetoes. A few of them hired me, not just to remove him, but to publically humiliate him so their own standing would increase.

"Once taking their fee (and just so you know I usually claim half upon taking the job and the remaining half when it is complete) I followed him for weeks. I had to understand his habits, see where he would be most vulnerable. Well, as it turns out, Sulpicus tended to visit brothels. Not the most appropriate activity for someone of his standing, no? Because he tried to keep discrete, he would not allow his guards to go with him on his nightly ventures.

"So I found a few higher priced girls, (such expenses will also need to be paid, by the way) and lulled him into thinking a new pleasure house was being set up in the villa of Lucius Publius Herpio, one of the most notable patricians in Isirya. Sulpicus didn't even wait one day before sampling this new establishment. He entered by the back way, where the girls had instructed him, and there Herpio awaited him, for earlier I had let him know that someone was planning on violating his wife that very night. There, Herpio killed Sulpicus on his own property as a matter of honor, and when it came to light in the Senate that Sulpicus had attempted to seduce a patrician woman... let's just say my clients always get what they pay for.

"I am afraid I can't tell you of any I have done with my own hand. As I said, that would be unethical. I am able to tell you about Sulpicus because the men responsible have all likewise died... prematurely. How's the wine?"

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I slide the wine glass towards the center of the table. "Sorry, I don't drink...with assassins. So, who won't you kill?"
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I'm a little concerned with your ability to do the job...your appearance works against you. Most of the people in your business tend to, well, blend into the background. You seem to stand out.
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"Nobody wants you dead. At least, nobody has contacted me about it." Takes a sip of the wine from your glass, then slides it back across the table.

"And besides, poisons are used by amateurs. They always taste horrible and bitter, it is practically impossible to poison someone without their knowledge. Although I hear of a mushroom that grows in Decia Minor that will kill as rapidly as a knife to the heart, yet tastes succulent and can be cooked like a common blackcap. And poisoned blades have some potential, but I have never trusted them. Poisons in general are not very reliable. It can take years of adding poison to food in undetectable amounts to have an effect. A blade is always much more effective.

"Robert, please don't let the decor fool you. I can 'blend in,' as you put it, in the seediest taverns and trenches in the Republic when need be. Assassins in general are often associated with the shadow and arcani in society, and truth be told, most of them are. But I have had a successful career, and my success entitles me to enjoy some of the rewards of my labors. In fact, since my clients nowadays tend to be the more respectable classes who can afford my fees, this rather un-spartan lifestyle is a perfect disguise. In fact, I am so well funded, I don't even need work any longer. But I do so for two reasons. First of all, a man who becomes a wine-bibber and a glutton will grow fat and lazy. I don't intend that to happen to me. Secondly, and this is about your question madame genevive, it is the nature of the job that is more enticing to me than the act itself. I won't kill any who don't deserve it, no matter how high the price. And I don't kill women, so really, its safe to drink the wine."

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I lift the glass and take a sip. The wine is sweet and fruity. I smile my appreciation. "Is this from the Southern Rurals?"

"Anyway, is a lying, cheating bastard of a husband a worthy target for you? I know he plans to take off with his mistress and leave me stranded and penniless. That is, unless someone stops him. Then I will have all I need for ten lifetimes. What do you say?"


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Eastern lowlands vintage, actually. Every ten years or so, the rains there fall twice as strongly as in the off years. Nothing compares to wines bottled in those times.

Now, about your husband, and I assume it is your husband? From your bitter tone I presume this isn't some academic question... If your husband was indeed breaking the covenant between you two, he is a liar and deceiver and yes, I would accept the task. But please understand, many a selfish woman has sought my favor simply because they coveted their husband's wealth. If you could offer me proof that your husband is indeed what he claims, that would be an appropriate starting point.


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So this is less a job for you and more a lucrative hobby?
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That sounds so harsh. Hobbies are useless, like playing dice or trying to collect stones of different colors. I'm more of a semi-retired professional who is fortunate enough to enjoy his work rather than simply toil away for my daily sesterce.
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My husband wouldn't have his wealth and power if it weren't for me. When we met he had nothing. I worked day and night washing clothes, sewing, whatever I could do to support us while he went to school. I even stood by him when he did that stint in jail for selling contraband. Now he's made it and he thinks it was all his doing. I just don't want my investment running away now that he's starting to pay off.

I'll bring you your proof. What are your terms? This will never come back to me, right?


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You bring proof, and we have an accord. I've done this for over thirty years, and never once have any of my clients had suspicion come upon them... except perhaps sometimes their victims would accuse them prior to their demise. As for price, we'll have to arrange that once I've decided how challenging of a task this will be. Your husband sounds like a common Idumean, puffed up in his own importance, yet truly impotent. It shouldn't cost you more than fifty thousand aureii.
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What part of killing people do you most enjoy? You do enjoy it don't you?
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-pulls a thin long blade and lays it on the table next to the wine glass. Smiles slowly-

"So, do you kill your competition? Or, do you allow other professionals to operate within the city? I speak of professionals, such as myself--not the simple thugs you mentioned earlier."

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"If you managed to get that weapon past the guards, you must be a professional. Do I allow you to operate? As long as I am not the target, feel free. If you have brought that for other purposes..." he pulls a long gladius from beneath the cushion.

"Of course, I will allow you operate. I have enough wealth to satisfy my fleshly wants, and in a city such as this I am sure there is more than enough work for the two of us. In fact, a knowledge of others in the business is useful when extra hands can ensure success. I have no problem with sharing.

"I must let you know that I do keep informed on the other 'professionals' in the city. While I may be willing to share, not all are. Should I learn that you intend to take all upon yourself by removing me, you will not be alive long enough to complete the task. So tell me, are you new in Isyria or must I have my spies executed for failing to tell me about you?"


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"Genevive, you ask what part I enjoy. A more apt question would be which part I don't. The challenge of studying the subject, creating an infallible plan, executing the plan, the sense of justice to know that right has been done. To say nothing of the act itself. Your name, is it from Gaul? It sounds gaulish to the tongue. I served in Gaul when I was conscripted. It was among those barbarians that I first felt the thrill of slitting a throat. You can't imagine the feeling. It is like lying with a woman, only it lasts longer.

"You don't know the thrill, do you? Does it scare you? Is that why you need someone like me to do what you yourself will not?"


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I cannot believe that you would think a lady of my standing would intimataly know the thrills of which you speak. Though it is not fear that stops me, but a lack of knowledge and skill. I would certainly be caught if I were to attempt this task myself.

But tell me, what is it like to slit a man's throat?


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"Fear of being caught is a valid reason for needing my services, if only because you lack the skills to see it through yourself. You ask what it is like? I assume you don't want to know so that you may stab him yourself. Women usually have a morbid curiosity about such things.

"Death comes inevitably when a certain point is crossed. Before, you can dress the wound, remove the arrow, or give the antidote. But after, no matter what is done, death will come. Once you learn to recognize that spot, and to know that you have complete control over someone's fate, that is what slitting a throat is like. It is time when you have all power in the world and time itself waits on you while you watch the spirit flee a useless corpse. It is as addictive as a lotus flower seed, and twice as joyful.

"Tell me, if I were to teach you what you need to know to do the deed yourself, would you still hire my services, or would you seek to find the thrill yourself?"


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"You pose an interesting query." I take a long slow sip from the wine glass while I contemplate. "I would be a hypocrite if I said I am not the kind of person that kills. Simply asking you to do it does not wash my hands." I put the glass down.

"And the way you describe it is most seductive. But I do not know if I would be able to draw blood with my own hand. I have never killed anything bigger than a bug in my life. Still.." I close my eyes and imagine the pleasure of slitting my cheating husband's throat and the moment of realization on his face, "I cannot say that the idea does not appeal to me."

"Would you truly be willing to teach me? What if once I start I do not want to stop?"


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