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Tightening the screws in the engine, Tony felt a deep surge of satisfaction. He was almost done. And then he could go home, back to his kids. They were so young and so adorably cute.But first he would have to stop by the local store and buy food.
The thought made him cringe. With the meager salary he got at the garage, he wouldn't be able to buy much. Just the barest essentials for life. It was hell, looking at his two sons and seeing their ribs. He could even count them.
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They were so young and so adorably cute.
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