http://www.worldofdarkness.com/novelcontest/
Here is the first part. If you would like to read the rest, I will email it to you. Thanks in advance.
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A neonate in a city of Methuselahs, Katherine Veltos, a young Ventrue, must decide whether to leave NYC and advance or stay and stagnate. She struggles with the desire for anonymity and security versus the thirst for power.
Paramont Gray, a Daeva unknown to the leading hierarchy of the city, schemes to attain power of his own. He forms a coterie of dissatisfied neonates and leads them onto the corrupted road to quick power. Caught in the master deceiver’s web, Katherine takes part in unsanctioned diablerie against city Kindred. Paramont appeals to the beast within as the neonates face the reality of their sin. Using blackmail and manipulation, Paramont seals his leadership over the coterie.
Feel free to send it over.
Sorry, my double-left-clicks got a little crazy and I accidently posted this twice.
I'm so pysched about reading this that I can't control my mouse skills. Yaowza.
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Especially since Cain awoke broke several bloodlines.
I like the synopsis. Personally I think any of the WW vampires would commit diablerie if they could get away with it.
Would the editors know?
I've read the first novel in this new setting and the author explains some things and leaves others. Based on the prior novel publications, I imagine readers will need to have some basic knowledge of the setting when reading the new novels. Then again, I could be totally wrong.
So, basically, I'm hoping I won't need to explain the different factions and sects in my synopsis and stick to the story. I only have 250 words.
As far as diaberlie, I want to show not only the act and benefits, but the consequences both physical and emotional (I hope I can). The new novel had one diaberlie scene, and to me, the author seemed to treat it lightly.
I appreciate the input and if you guys think I am way off base here, please let me know.
I am sending the rest to those who said they could look at it. Thanks bunches!!