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Posted by rustafarianblackpolarbear (Member # 2638) on :
 
if you even care, i've just noticed that our four latest topics are scifi. i was wondering if some of you would like to make a 5 word at a time contribution story?
if this is the wrong section to do this in please redirect me or if you don't do it please let me know.

if we can i will start
along time ago in a... (ha im so clever!)
 


Posted by Bumbus_McGee (Member # 2644) on :
 
tiny bucket, there lived a
 
Posted by Gunslinger (Member # 2641) on :
 
clever little knight named Mordred...
 
Posted by wbriggs (Member # 2267) on :
 
who was no bigger than
 
Posted by djvdakota (Member # 2002) on :
 
a shriveled miniature marshmallow. In
 
Posted by Gunslinger (Member # 2641) on :
 
that tiny bucket he often...
 
Posted by rickfisher (Member # 1214) on :
 
designed delicate dinnerplates, despite dropping
 
Posted by kkmmaacc (Member # 2643) on :
 
the occasional hint that he
 
Posted by Gunslinger (Member # 2641) on :
 
was a homosexual knight seeking
 
Posted by shadowynd (Member # 2077) on :
 
solace in servile somnambulance. Since
 
Posted by Ray (Member # 2415) on :
 
the accident in the privy
 
Posted by Kathleen Dalton Woodbury (Member # 59) on :
 
Ahem!
 
Posted by Kathleen Dalton Woodbury (Member # 59) on :
 
It's okay to do it, but use a little restraint.
 
Posted by Spaceman (Member # 9240) on :
 
He's been wearing diapers. Only
 
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the lady of the house
 
Posted by rustafarianblackpolarbear (Member # 2638) on :
 
is tired of cleaning up
 
Posted by Ezuma (Member # 2646) on :
 
his dirty mess. One day
 
Posted by rustafarianblackpolarbear (Member # 2638) on :
 
he went too far. She
 
Posted by wbriggs (Member # 2267) on :
 
found, in his bucket: a
 
Posted by rustafarianblackpolarbear (Member # 2638) on :
 
hallucination in which he killed
 
Posted by Spaceman (Member # 9240) on :
 
something not of this earth.
 
Posted by mythopoetic (Member # 2624) on :
 
He forgot to dispose of the
 
Posted by Ahavah (Member # 2599) on :
 
hallucinogenic space body, unleashing plagues
 
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of rancid earthworms, spreading much
 
Posted by bladeofwords (Member # 2132) on :
 
shriveled miniature marshmallow eating that
 
Posted by theokaluza (Member # 2315) on :
 
had diahrea for a fortnight.
 
Posted by hoptoad (Member # 2145) on :
 
One word to contribution: scatological
 
Posted by bladeofwords (Member # 2132) on :
 
Accordingly, scatalogical research became the
 
Posted by Ezuma (Member # 2646) on :
 
source of Dislexic Llama Dancing
 
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In other news, aliens from
 
Posted by Ahavah (Member # 2599) on :
 
the planet Earth are infiltrating
 
Posted by Ezuma (Member # 2646) on :
 
the mouths of Carnivorous Chickens
 
Posted by wbriggs (Member # 2267) on :
 
(that is, all of them)
 
Posted by Ahavah (Member # 2599) on :
 
of which only three survived.
 
Posted by Elan (Member # 2442) on :
 
And then the monolith awoke.
 
Posted by rickfisher (Member # 1214) on :
 
But Monolith hasn't even posted!
 
Posted by Jeraliey (Member # 2147) on :
 
It wasn't a pretty sight.
 
Posted by Jeraliey (Member # 2147) on :
 
(simultaneous posting is much fun)

[This message has been edited by Jeraliey (edited June 16, 2005).]
 


Posted by Ezuma (Member # 2646) on :
 
Then a herbivorous crocodile some
 
Posted by TheoPhileo (Member # 1914) on :
 
thirty leagues away heard a
 
Posted by rustafarianblackpolarbear (Member # 2638) on :
 
submarine approaching rapidly and he
 
Posted by Ezuma (Member # 2646) on :
 
ate some mildly interesting seaweed
 
Posted by rustafarianblackpolarbear (Member # 2638) on :
 
before choking in disgust. The
 
Posted by LeGLeSs (Member # 2655) on :
 
EVIL octopus came at him
 
Posted by rustafarianblackpolarbear (Member # 2638) on :
 
Along time ago in a tiny bucket, there lived a clever little knight named Mordred who was no bigger than a shrivelled miniature marshmallow. In that tiny bucket he often designed delicate dinnerplates, despite dropping the occasional hint that he was a homosexual knight seeking solace in servile somnambulance. Since the accident in the privy, he's been wearing diapers. Only the lady of the house is tired of cleaning up his dirty mess. One day he went too far. She found, in his bucket: a hallucination in which he killed something not of this earth. He forgot to dispose of the hallucinogenic space body, unleashing plagues of rancid earthworms, spreading much shriveled miniature marshmallow eating that had diahrea for a fortnight. Accordingly, scatological research became the source of dyslexic llama dancing. In other news, aliens from the planet Earth are infiltrating the mouths of carnivorous chickens (that is, all of them) of which only three survived. And then the monolith awoke. It wasn't a pretty sight. Then a herbivorous crocodile some thirty leagues away heard a submarine approaching rapidly and he ate some mildly interesting seaweed before choking in disgust. The EVIL octopus came at him….

Now, EVERYONE, critique it!
 


Posted by LeGLeSs (Member # 2655) on :
 
haha it's very random, where to start??? hmm....
 
Posted by rustafarianblackpolarbear (Member # 2638) on :
 
as evilly as the evil
 
Posted by rustafarianblackpolarbear (Member # 2638) on :
 
oops how silly of me to post it in the wrong one after just setting up that it has changed sections. Ignore that last one by me (and this one: yu never read this- except to remember what its telling you of course). Ha i'm lost. Oh well
 
Posted by TheoPhileo (Member # 1914) on :
 
I think it's terribly discombobulated and doesn't follow a single train of thought for more than five words.
 


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