Hatrack River Writers Workshop: By The Fangs of Lestat, I Was Transformed

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Posted by dead_soul (Member # 6412) on :

Like always, when thoughts overburdened me, I turned off the lights and roamed in my place.

I couldn't bear waiting anymore. Will he really give me the visit he promised the day before, or did he change his mind? I was staring at my black ceiling, drowsily lying on the ground beside my bed. The silk curtains were flying on the cold breeze of the night. My legs were freezing and I started shaking, but I didn’t even think about closing the window. I was more concerned about what hopefully was going to happen any minute soon.

But there it was. A shadow I’ve been dreaming to see forever. There he was, the man I’ve been waiting for. The man I’ve always been eager to look at…to feel…to touch. I only waited

[This message has been edited by Kathleen Dalton Woodbury (edited March 13, 2008).]

Posted by Devnal (Member # 6724) on :

oops, i think you may have exceeded 13 lines

Posted by InarticulateBabbler (Member # 4849) on :

Devnal is right. AND, you can't submit a "fanfic" story. All characters must be your creation. Lestat is Anne Rice's.

Posted by Bent Tree (Member # 7777) on :

This post should look like this.

quote:
Like always, when thoughts overburdened me, I turned off the lights and roamed in my place.
I couldn't bear waiting anymore. Will he really give me the visit he promised the day before, or did he change his mind? I was staring at my black ceiling, drowsily lying on the ground beside my bed. The silk curtains were flying on the cold breeze of the night. My legs were freezing and I started shaking, but I didn’t even think about closing the window. I was more concerned about what hopefully was going to happen any minute soon.
But there it was. A shadow I’ve been dreaming to see forever. There he was, the man I’ve been waiting for. The man I’ve

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Posted by Kathleen Dalton Woodbury (Member # 59) on :

If this involves, as the title implies, Anne Rice's character, I'll have to delete it.