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Did you honestly think that your petty betrayal would go unnoticed? Or unpunished?We know that they sent you here to investigate. Those spymasters - how they like to send their little pawns scurrying about, with their hidden tools and their secret words. We expected someone to be sent ever since Fredrick’s body was found in the bank vault.
Do you feel me inside your mind? The slight tingling sensation is the delicate web of your thoughts and memories, slowly dissolving.
It was not surprising to us that the sigils around the lifeless form; the black candles, silver needles and other trappings would arouse suspicion in certain quarters. And so we were
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Looking for readers? I'd be happy to read.
The premise is that the reader is the “victim” and gets to enjoy the villain’s denouement.
Not sure if quotes are technically needed, as everything is the voice of one character? Would they help, do you think?
The italics are supposed to represent telepathic communication.
It’s a quirky piece – a little too quirky, perhaps I wonder what Anne will make of it...