Gran said that the road to Urveld was paved with good intentions. I didn’t ask her what the hell that meant until after five maddening hours into our journey.
“Good intentions?” I asked, feeling my stomach lurch as our carriage careened around another hairpin curve. “Then why didn't they straighten the damn thing before paving it?”
Gran, looking both content and hilarious in her bright purple robes and wide-brimmed hat, pursed her lips and dipped her head condescendingly. “Because the Urveldi wanted to placate the locals. So they built a road in honor of Shekchi, the snake god. Clever, those Urveldi. Two beasts with one dart, as they say. The natives didn’t revolt because they got their idol, and the Urveldi king got his coveted road to the East. And so the
Merry Christmas to you and yours as well!
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Gran said that the road to Urveld was paved with good intentions. I didn’t ask her what the hell that meant until after five maddening hours into our journey.
“Good intentions?” I asked, feeling my stomach lurch as our carriage careened around another hairpin curve. “Then why didn't they straighten the damn thing before paving it?”
Gran, looking both content and hilarious in her bright purple robes and wide-brimmed hat, pursed her lips and dipped her head condescendingly. “Because the Urveldi wanted to placate the locals. So they built a road in honor of Shekchi, the snake god. Clever, those Urveldi. Two beasts with one dart, as they say. The natives didn’t revolt because they got their idol, and the Urveldi king got his coveted road to the East. And so the
Not bad at all, I assume its suppose to be light hearted for that is the way it feels.
Nice play on a well known Phrase.
By the way is her wide brimmed hat red by any chance?
You might start it without the "Gran said" though. Maybe add "Gran said it for the fifth time" or some such.
That's all I can think of to say.
Merry Christmas---if you see this before the 25th is over.
If you don't I hope you all had a good Christmas.
I like the first 13. A strong voice, interesting characters and good interaction. I also wonder where they are going.
I'd definitely read on.
I can't hear my wife yell; I can't see her face
I guess I must have lost her when we turned at Jonssons' place!!
Life with Gran must be quite an Adventure.