Here are my first 13ish for, "Oracle II"
What Are Dreams?
Do you think the dreams are yours, what if they were not your own.
What if when you dream it was actual reality, but just a little further away than anywhere you have ever even thought of consciously.
What if, when you dream you are really having an out of body experience in the eyes and ears and mind of another person, somewhere on a distant planet that has intelligent life.
In this world, this is completely true, and all people dream but only one person, a six thousand year old man who is deceased, known as the oracle when he was alive, could wake up from his drea, and look at a star chart to determine which
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Your intro reads more like an idea than a story. The whole 'what if' thing is what a story is about.
What if the whole world is actually a virtual reality created by machines? Well, that is the story of the matrix. I would suggest just starting the story and doing away with the info-dump explanation. All of this stuff can be explained during the unfolding of the story.
See if you can move it around to reflect that and still keep your story idea alive.
I think you have a good germ growing here.