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Posted by rcmann (Member # 9757) on :
 
I have a 500 word fic that is in dialogue. I have never tried that approach before, and I could use some feedback. I won't bother to post any of it here, since it is so short and, being dialogue, the "hook" is spaced out over several lines of speech. The gist is someone who goes on a blind date, discovers that their date is a vampire, and then gets cornered with their undead date in a blind alley by an angry werewolf. The story picks up from there.

Any takers? Pretty please?
 
Posted by LDWriter2 (Member # 9148) on :
 
I'll give it a go if you don't mind waiting 'till the weekend to get it back. Depending on how much work I think it needs. [Smile]
 
Posted by A Yeatts (Member # 9500) on :
 
Send it on over.
Anna [Smile]
 
Posted by Shaygirl (Member # 9761) on :
 
If you're willing to let a newby give her best shot, then I'd like to read it. But like LD, you probably won't hear from me tell the weekend.

Shaygirl
 
Posted by C@R3Y (Member # 9669) on :
 
Send it on over. I'll have it back to you in a flash. :]
 


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