Is anyone willing to critique my first ever attempt at flash fiction? It's only 133 words, so it seems kinda silly to post it here...it would only be missing a line or two. But I can email it.
I don't have a ton of time to critique long stories at the moment, but would be willing to trade if anyone wants comments on their first page.
Posted by wetwilly (Member # 1818) on :
I'll read. Send it on over. My current project is a longer story, so don't worry about reciprocating.
Posted by tigerlilly (Member # 10338) on :
Thanks! Just sent it to you.
Posted by tigerlilly (Member # 10338) on :
Any other takers?
Wetwilly gave me some really useful feedback (thanks!). Would love to get at least one more review before I rewrite.
Posted by extrinsic (Member # 8019) on :
Consider a fragment fraction posted here, say one-tenth. I don't generally care to workshop privately. I might comment here on a fragment, say, thirteen words. Thirteen lines is a maximum. Perhaps a small posted fraction would entice others to comment on the whole.
Posted by Lamberguesa (Member # 10320) on :
You can send it my way. Can't promise it'll be the best feedback you've ever received but at least it's a second opinion.
-A.L.
Posted by tigerlilly (Member # 10338) on :
Thanks, Lamberguesa. I don't see a way to contact you, since your email isn't listed in your profile, but mine's listed, so if you drop me a line I'll send the flash piece to you.
Posted by TaleSpinner (Member # 5638) on :
I'll take a look as well if you'd like. No need to reciprocate.
Pat
Posted by tigerlilly (Member # 10338) on :
Thanks, TaleSpinner, just sent it. Posted by Lamberguesa (Member # 10320) on :
Apologies, my email should be visible now.
Posted by tigerlilly (Member # 10338) on :
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