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Posted by Sara Genge (Member # 3468) on :
www.helixsf.comThanks to all the hatrackers who critiqued this. I really appreciate your help.
Wohoo! I'm so happy. Do tell me what you think of the story.
Posted by KayTi (Member # 5137) on :
Nice! That was a really interesting way to tell a story. Interesting work on mental diaries. Congratulations!