Well, it took a lot of critting to batter it into shape, but the final version of my short story 'Paradise' has been accepted by Kaleidotrope for their April 2008 issue. And it only took them a few days to get back to me, which is great :P
Thanks for everyone who gave me feedback on it. I know I sent out about three or four versions to readers on here, and some of you were very patient with both me and the story.
Regards
[This message has been edited by baduizt (edited October 01, 2007).]