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Posted by Meredith (Member # 8368) on :
 
Here's the trailer.
 
Posted by History (Member # 9213) on :
 
Have you considered adding background music?

Dr. Bob
 
Posted by Meredith (Member # 8368) on :
 
I could. I think I'll try something along that line with the next one.
 
Posted by LDWriter2 (Member # 9148) on :
 
Not bad but at the same time kinda blah.

Music could help. A longer scene with the tower might help. Or zoom in on it.

A scene with a real wolf maybe. But you would almost have to film that yourself.

It would take more work but can you change the size of certain words? My church has taken to showing short films that have something to do with the sermon. When there are words that go along with what the narrator is saying usually there are different size words on the screen at the same time.
 


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