I'm back in the structuring phase of writing my story and I need to figure out whether I should tell the entire story (length as yet unknown, probably a shortish novel) strictly from the point of view of my main character, or if adding the viewpoint of the, oh, how should I say it, other main force in the story. If I did use both viewpoints, the main character's would be regular third person limited, and the other would be much more cinematic, perhaps in an omniscient sort of way, just showing that these characters are not who the main character thinks thinks they are. Just looking for some thoughts and direction on this.
Lila
I'd read Characters and Viewpoint by OSC...most libraries will have a copy. It goes into detail on all the viewpoints and may help you decide which is right. Each has its advantages and disadvantages.
If you use two POVs where one is a character POV and the other is cinematic or FO, and don't make it very easy for the reader to tell when the secondary, non-character POV has begun and ended (and I mean italicized and directly following every chapter break or similar full page break mark), then it will just look like sloppy POV.
I agree that it works best to balance the viewpoints, or make them very structurally distinct. (Of course, there are cases where it has been done brilliantly, but those are the very rare exception, IMO. I've seen it done badly by very experienced writers.)
I went through a major POV decision a few months ago. I'd started my novel with only one POV, third person limited. As the story grew, however, I found that it would really be richer if I added a second POV (also third person limited). I was initially very resistant, because a second viewpoint adds a LOT of complications, but it has made a huge difference.
If you add a second viewpoint, and you're already doing limited third, you're going to have to develop a distinct voice for your second viewpoint. You're going to face choices about which viewpoint to use for particular events. There are all sorts of little things you have to think about.
In the end, you're the only one who can decide how to tell the story. I'd suggest starting with just one POV. If the second is necessary, it will probably become obvious fairly quickly.
Eljay, your suggestion to start with one POV and see what happens sounds pretty good. I'll have to learn to trust my instincts. That's probably the hardest part.