Showing Versus Telling chapter, end of chapter exercises, page 126:
"Introduce a new location solely by describing it. Don't tell us what it's like. Just describe it. Let us come to our own conclusions. Is it scary? Imposing? Barren? Evoke the mood by the description, not by telling us what the mood is."
Setting chapter, solution #5, page 182:
"Good settings are distinguished from great settings in that the former will name details, but the latter will go one step further and use these details to make an impression. For instance, a setting can be well described by saying 'It was a small, dark room, poorly lit and airless,' but better described by adding 'It was oppressive, like a tomb.' Remember that the best settings are there not for their own sake but as a means to making an atmospheric impression."
Well, which is it? Is there some distinction I'm not making in what he prescribes?
--Mel
[This message has been edited by Jeraliey (edited April 24, 2005).]
I remember that The First Five Pages started out really well, but got weaker and weaker as it went along - it doesn't surprise me that advice from p. 126 is stronger than advice from 50 pages later, and contradicts earlier material.
I'm in close to the end of The First Five Pages and I keep skimming. He'll make a point, then remake it, reiterate it, expound on the reiteration and then sum up. It's driving me crazy.
At the same time there are some good things in there, so it's worth wading through. I just wish it weren't quite such a slog.
As for describing something for effect. If you are going to describe a room that has a sinister feel. You can say it feel sinister, but that's like cheating, it needs to be backed up. If you describe a room with hanging manicles discolord by blood, and other instruments of torture, that description will imply it's own feeling.
Once you know how to describe things to give it a certain feel, then it can be emphisized by adding a feeling as well.
Together I think it is saying to do more than just "say" it is something, but back it up with things that will add the proper texture to make it real to the reader.