The main thing I remember when I am down, is, writing is fun, it is. Its why i do it. While I still dream about the #1 blockbuster, movie, game rights, comic books, lunch boxes, condom sales and all that, the truth is its not what makes me write. Its the stories I want to tell, and I have fun doing it. My first novel, by any measure of the word of good writing, was terrible. If I had posted it here, I would have been ripped to shreds, but, and a big but, I am still asked by the poeple who read it, when is the sequel coming out? you left me hanging, where does he go?
Chin up, it may not get easier, but hanging out here will make your writing better.
One of the things I did that let me get through The Shaman's Curse was to make a rule. If I had moved on by more than a paragraph, I couldn't go back and revise what I had written. Revision would come later. I could make notes about what I wanted to add, subtract, or change. But I couldn't DO it until I finished the whole story. I only broke that rule twice when I realized I'd gone down a completely wrong path and had to back up and go in a different direction. The first thing is to get the story on paper. Reality is that your going to go through several revisions anyway. But first you have to tell the story. All the way to the end.
I've been sick lately, which doesn't help. When it rains, it pours.
I do love the critiques. But, like you said, they make you aware of so many problems you didn't even think about.
Meredith, thanks for that. That's definitely a good idea. I tend to write slow, but in the end have better drafts. I don't know if I like doing it this way, though, as its easy to get discouraged rummaging over all of the errors.
I might try something similar.
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I never let anyone else see my first draft, it is too raw for good critiques, and I would spend far too much time changing things before story was even finished. When I finish a novel or story, I put it into my 'magic box' for 28 days, then go back and re-write. The second draft I put up for critique. The third draft refines it more and normally shortens the word count by approx 10%.
Sometimes working on two totally different stories at once also helps. I often have an SF running in the background when writing fantasy.
Most importantly, just have fun with your writing
If I absolutely have to write, and can't get anything out with any ease, I try the one-page trick---I sit down at a typewriter (a word processor won't do for this), put in a blank page, and type till I get to the end of the page---then stop for the day. Usually by the end of the page I'm enthusiastic about writing---and I can carry my enthusiasm from one day to the next. And usually the next story comes easier. (For this kind of story, any old idea will do.)
I would say that if critiques appear to be the source of the angst, refrain from getting any for a few weeks. Getting too many opinions and trying to address them all can be overwhelming. It's doubly so when the critiques come from a group of aspiring writers because we probably tend to put disproportionate emphasis on how we would do things, and on whatever facet of craft we've most recently been stressing over. And critiques on the 1st thirteen in isolation is probably another multiplier.
I'm stealing from Jerry Cleaver here, but he breaks the writing process into to fundamental modes. The "flow" process, and the "editing" process. He attributes blocks and negative feelings to the editing process run amuck. For me it has been helpful to ignore the temptation to continually edit and revise as I go, to just get things down on paper as rapidly as possible, then go back and clean it up.
Maybe I drifted a bit off-topic, but my attitude is usually more positive when I'm getting a lot of words down or reworking a completed draft than it is when I'm hung up for an hour or two on a single paragraph or sentence during a first draft. Very little of my first drafts survives until the final draft anyway.
Another thing to do with writer's block, I think, is to do something else -- I go for photo walks, or listen to music, or enjoy a long, aimless drive. Somehow this mixes the creative juices up, gets 'em flowing again.
Also, leave the story on a back burner for a while, especially after some crits. This gives distance, and perhaps a better perspective.
Finally, while crits are immensely valuable, I don't believe it's necessary to respond to everyone's comments. One person's "Huh?" can be another's "Wow!"
One can't please everyone, so I try to please just the readers who seem representative of my target audience. For example, I have one story that's probably destined for an English market because American readers tend not to get some of the references, and to explain them would destroy its atmosphere. (Well, I like to think it's atmosphere; could just be hot air, I suppose ...)
Edited to add: BTW I think dividing a project into "flow" and "edit" phases are an excellent method, one I use all the time.
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I think I have a problem.
Maybe I'll try writing "notes", rather than actually fixing the work up.
The notes are a good idea, it will allow you later to go back and rewrite or edit the parts that need to, also remember if its a novel, it could change again the further you get into it, so the notes are a good idea.
That is a problem. If you're going through anything similar, then you're not convinced you're writing for fun.
Try writing observations and ideas on napkins and color paper, with markers or crayons. Scribble thought rambles in your messiest cursive. Tell yourself you could throw this writing away, and if it really mattered to you, you'd remember it well enough to start over. When you can play with your writing again, then move on to one of the other suggestions here.
Give yourself a short time limit when editing. Set a cell phone, alarm clock, or enlist someone's help. If you're not making progress when the alarm goes off or someone interrupts you, then drop what you're working on for a while. Let your brain mull over the trouble sentence while you're taking a walk, doing chores, etc.
Or, don't edit any of your work until you've completely drafted several stories and reviewed more published works. When you're itching to try new techniques, remember the goal is to bring your drafts one rewrite closer to a finished state. I don't know any published author who can finish a story in only two drafts.
I have had great trouble dealing with depression and doubting myself as a writer; enough so that it stalls my work. When that happens I try to find something else small and easily accomplished that I CAN succeed at, regardless of whetther or not it has anything to do with writing. I make a point of noting it down as something to be accomplished, and after I get it done I note that it was completed. And even though it was something small, something insignificant, it gets me going and I start writing again.
Sometime we just need to relearn how to succeed.
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but thats due to other things that i need to get fixed first.
RFW2nd
Liberty Hall Flash Challenge sounds interesting... I'll have to take a look.
Thanks!