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Posted by wrenbird (Member # 3245) on :
 
Got any that drive you crazy?

Go ahead and rattle them off. I'm listening.
 


Posted by Robert Nowall (Member # 2764) on :
 
Well, the notion that anything beyond the immediate so-called post-Apocalypse will be a mean and miserable future.
 
Posted by Zero (Member # 3619) on :
 
It bores me that it's always nuclear caused, some kind of holdover phobia from the coldwar days, oh and radiation (somehow) is rarely a factor.
 
Posted by annepin (Member # 5952) on :
 
Or it's some virus that somehow has mutated everyone into super humans by altering our joints, vision, and giving us super strength.
 
Posted by Patrick James (Member # 7847) on :
 
Insane biker gangs with no visible motives.
 
Posted by TheOnceandFutureMe on :
 
Fingerless gloves.
 
Posted by Kakichi (Member # 5814) on :
 
Well, lets take a look at what a post-apocalyptic world would be caused by:

1. Nuclear devastation. Plenty to work with here, something like hope in the wastelands of not just the U.S., but anywhere in the world. Nuclear devastation would affect the entire planet, thus leaving an infinite amount of stories to be told of survival, direct or indirect, of mankind, animals, etc... Still plenty of potential here without going into cliches or copying already-existent material, such as that from the "Fallout" videogame series (which is an excellent, and well-developed vision of the future in my opinion, not to mention that I'm a big fan of the games because of the back story, gameplay, writing, etc...).

2. Global Warming. Again, more than enough to work with here to keep things fresh, especially since this result is more likely to happen than nuclear devastation. Stories of survival and hardship in many areas of the world would be a big draw, i.e. what would happen to the inland areas of the world when all the coastal peoples had to slowly migrate to them because their own lands are slowly being swallowed by the ocean?

3. Off-world Lifeform Contact. This is probably the most cliche of all the possibilities here so far, but I think there are far more stories to be told of an Earth that has made contact with other life (or other life that has made contact with us) to be told, whether it be bad or good. Chances are greater that our own peoples and governments would react completely different when it came to off-world life that the conflicts would be endless, leading to a story not even as much about the off-world life as our own inability to agree on a single course of action as a planet to handling a situation.

These are just three examples I thought of off the top of my head, and hope that maybe it can spark an idea or two. I know I just did for myself!

As for the post-apocalyptic, I'm a big fan of the genre so seeing this thread mentioning cliches (every genre obviously has them) struck at me and inspired me to come up with something fresh to avoid the above-mentioned (and below mentioned) cliches.

Thanks for listening!

 


Posted by Cheyne (Member # 7710) on :
 
All of the post-apocalyptic psychic talents that we have hidden in our DNA are cliche. Oh yes, and the benevolent/malevolent supercomputers that lay waiting in the desert to be discovered by the only sane, moral, goody-two-shoes left on Earth.
 
Posted by JamieFord (Member # 3112) on :
 
(Fingerless gloves.)

LOL!


 


Posted by Pyraxis (Member # 7990) on :
 
Environmentalist propaganda. For the love of all that's holy, please write a story that doesn't shove it down anyone's throat.
 
Posted by extrinsic (Member # 8019) on :
 
Dystopias where no appreciable reversal of fortune occurs. Mostly just from bad to worse for the focal characters and their societies doesn't float my boat.

Also, dystopias that partially reflect medieval European history and overlook the causal circumstances that; A, caused the Dark (Middle) Ages; B, transcended the circumstances that caused the Dark Ages.

One recent collection of events that shows in a relatively brief snapshot of time what happens when society breaks down played out from Hurricane Katrina.
 


Posted by J (Member # 2197) on :
 
The unsupported notion that people won't quickly re-form stable social structures, as they have after every cataclysm for the last 10,000 years.
 
Posted by Rommel Fenrir Wolf II (Member # 4199) on :
 
my faverit bumper sticker back before Y2K

"Bullets the curency of the next millenium"

and i took it to heart for i have started stock pilling them for the 21 Dec 2010 End of the world thing the history channel keeps talking about.

RFW2nd
 


Posted by Gan (Member # 8405) on :
 
Gonna have to go with insane biker gangs.

On another note. I love the way the Fallout games depict such a scenario, though, and it's certainly believable.
 


Posted by annepin (Member # 5952) on :
 
Sorry, but being a big fan of fingerless gloves myself, i gotta say, I think they're classic, not cliched!
 
Posted by philocinemas (Member # 8108) on :
 
I own a pair of fingerless gloves - I use them for weight-lifting. All I need now is a Mohawk and a motorcycle and I'll be ready, "dudes".
 
Posted by Nick T (Member # 8052) on :
 

Are the fingerless gloves a result of the apocalypse (maybe there's a giant warehouse where the nuclear blast *just* reached the fingers of the stored gloves) or a sign of things to come (i.e. when your good driving gloves start losing fingers, it's time to head to that underground bunker)?
 
Posted by Lyrajean (Member # 7664) on :
 
Hmmm... nuclear catastrope reducing us to some sort of new dark ages stikes me as a cliche. As is the epidemic that leaves only one or a handful or people standing...

I'd like to see stories where the dramatic change event unravels slowly rather than quickly and is a work in progress rather than a done deal. Also, how 'bout have the reader aware but not the people in said world aware that life as they know it is ending / has ended , albeit slowly...

People in the middle ages still thought they were living in a Roman period long after the time when historians now consider that civilization ended. That's why you have folks like Charlemagne trying to get themselves appointed 'Holy Roman Emperor', or some such nonsense.

Here goes: how'bout a story about someone running for president of the US and its slowly made aware to the reader taht the US he or she or it is running for office in is not in any shape or form our country...
 


Posted by rstegman (Member # 3233) on :
 
In any serious devastation, the governments concentrate on the population centers, trying to bring things to order there where the most people are effected.
The populations in the "boondocks" the outlying areas, are basically on their own.

With most stories the gangs appear where there is no law, and they become the government. The gangs then go out and collect their "taxes" and eliminate anybody who might challenge their power. They will fight other gang or law for control over the region.
Most stories, such as in the MAD MAX series, has someone who is not going to bow to the gangs, hence the story.

For a post apocalypse story, simply have a group of guys deciding they are going to be in charge, then have someone resisting their control.

I would love to see a story from the gang's point of view. They are doing what has to be done, at least from their point of view, and cannot seem to break the stranger who is resisting them. For this story, the reader doesn't have to like the gang members or leaders, but the reader does have to understand why they are doing it.

Another story would be to have where everybody is trying to prevent global warming, and accidentally cause global cooling where we enter another ice age.



 


Posted by wrenbird (Member # 3245) on :
 
These are great guys! Some made me laugh out loud. Others made a whole lot of sense.

Thanks so much!
 


Posted by Cheyne (Member # 7710) on :
 
RSTEGMAN: "Another story would be to have where everybody is trying to prevent global warming, and accidentally cause global cooling where we enter another ice age."

There is a novel called 'America' (I think) perhaps KDW will know who wrote it.(she knows everything) I don't think the writer is a regular Sci Fi writer.
The novel is about a European explorer visiting America after an ice age that would have been prevented had we only continued our overuse of carbon based fuels.
 


Posted by Kathleen Dalton Woodbury (Member # 59) on :
 
Sorry, don't know that one. <hangs head in shame>

But I have heard that one of the predicted results of global warming is that the temperature difference in the oceans will change to the point that the Gulf Stream will phase out, and the warm water (and, I guess, air) it brings to the British Isles will stop, causing an ice age there, at least.

Supposedly that will contribute to an ice age elsewhere as well (which global warming might help make bearable?).
 


Posted by InarticulateBabbler (Member # 4849) on :
 
All I can think of is Franz Kafka's Amerika, which is also called The Stoker (and not a post apocalyptic tale; nor finished), and JG Ballard's Hello America.

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Posted by Cheyne (Member # 7710) on :
 
IB: Thanks, The JG Ballard book, 'Hello America' was the one I meant. I read it back in the 80's, so I can't be sure if it is good or just memorable.

KDW: No shame, you can't read them all.
 


Posted by Robert Nowall (Member # 2764) on :
 
I'm at a loss. Aren't "fingerless gloves" called "mittens?"

*****

I feel the need to cite favorite works in the genre.

Davy, Edgar Pangborn. Except for the narrative frame, which takes place (apparently) on one of the Azores, the action takes place in the northeast United States--only the United States is gone and a bunch of squabbling small kingdoms have taken its place. Civilization as we know it has vanished. Global warming has also taken place and the coastlines are altered. Yet the characters in the story come across as people who are able to put it aside and get on with their lives.

Earth Abides, George R. Stewart. This is one of those "last people on Earth" story, where the vanished civilization is explored and the survivors gradually come together in groups. Here there's a good deal of regret (on the part of the main character, mostly) for the end of our civilization, though he also does his best, bit by agonizing bit, to see that his descendants have a future before them.
 


Posted by JudyMac (Member # 8354) on :
 
The normal suspects...

Nuclear War, Biological War, EMP Pulse destroying all electronic equipment, Aliens, Ice Age, Tidal waves, Asteroids, Quantum wormholes, Earthquakes, Global warming, Genetically engineered plants that eat humans, Time traveller with bomb, Disease/mutant insects that destroy all crops, Mutants, Zombies, God and the Devil etc.

Particular hate: No thought given to the fact that if a real apocalypse did occur, that is the end of the world, nada, Ragnarok. Thus there is no such thing as a post-apocalypse society.

Me? I'd start looking seriously at the present fertility statistics, who needs a futuristic event when mankind is doing so well at causing his own demise.
The last stats from the BMA in the UK were: 1 in 4 women could only reproduce through IVF, and 1 in 4 men were gay, our gene pool is decreasing. Without the aid of medical intervention, will humankind still be here in 1000 years?
So if there was a major disaster, and we did lose some of our technology base, we could be in real trouble...


 


Posted by JudyMac (Member # 8354) on :
 
After having my curiousity tweaked by this thread, I wandered over to New Scientist magazine. The following interview with Lovelock, really caught my eye:

One last chance to save mankind: http://www.newscientist.com/article/mg20126921.500-one-last-chance-to-save-mankind.html?full=true
 


Posted by BoredCrow (Member # 5675) on :
 
Robert - they mean the gloves where there are no tips to the finger. Preferred by some musicians when marching outdoors and, apparently, by apocalyptic folks.

Heh, I'm writing a semi-post apocalyptic novel (eg the apocalypse is happening slowly, and hasn't killed everyone quite yet), and I am happy to say I've pretty much avoided all these cliches!
 


Posted by Robert Nowall (Member # 2764) on :
 
I remembered one post-apocalyptic beef last night---but it's more a beef about the execution, rather than the post-ap image.

The way the movie version of something will involve science and scientists, often the scientists who are responsible for the apocalypse in the first place (say, all three versions of I Am Legend---not sure of the Will Smith version, but am relying on press reports), rather than sticking with the Everyman figures of the original material (as in the Richard Matheson I Am Legend, and also its bastard-child movie, Night of the Living Dead.)
 


Posted by Robert Nowall (Member # 2764) on :
 
Gloves without fingers...we usually call them "gloves with holes."
 
Posted by Gan (Member # 8405) on :
 
quote:
Gloves without fingers...we usually call them "gloves with holes."

Blasphemy!
 


Posted by SchamMan89 (Member # 5562) on :
 
This isn't really a cliche, but I hate when apocalyptic stories serve as nothing more than a soapbox for the author to cry about how horrible humanity is.
 
Posted by Patrick James (Member # 7847) on :
 
I agree with Scham on that. Which is why I started to write a satire of that... My ability at satire--how to discribe it... Lacking! Yes, that's the word!

I still say insane bikers who have very little motivation for anything they do. (Especially when they wear fishnets).

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Posted by TaleSpinner (Member # 5638) on :
 
Insane bikers don't need motivation. What's the point of being insane if you have to have motive?

I used to ride with a bike club in Orlando, where the motto was, "We don't go anywhere in a straight line." Why? 'Cos it's fun is why. One person's "fun" can be another's "Why'd they do that?" and a writer's "But what's their motivation?" Insane fun, mayhem 'cos it's mad, that's the motivation.

(And as a plot device, insane bikers are like someone jumping into the room with guns blazing.)
 


Posted by KayTi (Member # 5137) on :
 
Shameless plug here, but we published a great apocalypse story on Flash Fiction Online this month.

As Their Eyes Touched God

Meanwhile, I'm also giggling at all the apocalyptic cliches. Like many things (thinking along the "everything's been written before" lines), I think that avoiding them all may be impossible, but not overdoing them would be a good idea. Good luck with your WIP, wrenbird! Haven't "seen" you around as much lately, stick around, will ya?
 


Posted by steffenwolf (Member # 8250) on :
 
Robert Nowall said: "Gloves without fingers...we usually call them "gloves with holes."

Haha, it's sort of like the difference between having jeans so long you've worn holes at the knees, and buying jeans from a company that wears the holes into the knees FOR you.

But seriously, I need fingerless gloves. The windows at my office leak heat something fierce, but I can't type with regular gloves on! My hands ache from the cold.
 


Posted by Brad R Torgersen (Member # 8211) on :
 
As Pyraxis noted, please Lord, no more Global Warming or Climate Change scenarios. These were hackneyed and painful, even when they were "new" and now they've become positively attrocious.

The "bomb" scenario was hot when the Cold War was still going on, but right now the chances of a total nuclear exchange seem even more remote than an environmental global catastrophe, so a Roadwarrior-esq type post-Apoc is almost a kind of alternate history. (And I do love the second Mad Max film, to be sure!)

I recently read Lucifer's Hammer by Niven and Pournelle and while it was a terrific read and I enjoyed it a heck of a lot, I couldn't buy into the idea that the comet would literally wipe out the entire United States in the manner described. Even with the endless rain and the climate effects, the interior of the country would not be touched by tsunami and much of the infrastructure and governing mechanisms would remain intact. So while the impact of Hamner-Brown would be a massive event, it would not be civilization-ending in the way described in the book. At least I don't think so, based on events as they're described.

Maybe this is what makes so many post-Apoc settings hard to believe: they take the ramifications of a singular terrible event, and blow them out of all proportion. There is very little that could affect the entire globe, all at once, to produce the kind of total-end-game scenario that most post-Apoc fiction inhabits. Very little.

More likely than not, a major disaster that affects one continent, won't necessarily spell doom for the others. Not unless we had an impact from a 100-mile wide asteroid that caused so much tectonic disturbance and cast up so much vapor and debris and carbon, that the planet was sent into a dark deep freeze that lasted decades or longer. That might be the one scenario I could buy.
 


Posted by philocinemas (Member # 8108) on :
 
Brad, what about the eruption of a super-volcano (like Yellowstone) or a near gamma-ray burst from a supernova? I'm sure there are many other quick global catastrophes that could occur to make life on Earth miserable for us. Stop being so pessimistic.
 
Posted by Brad R Torgersen (Member # 8211) on :
 
He he he he.
 
Posted by AstroStewart (Member # 2597) on :
 
I think post-apocalyptic stories where the apocalypse is always the direct cause of mankind being stupid and evil are getting cliche. We destroyed the planet by global warming... boring. We destroyed the planet by nuclear holocaust... boring. Of the various apocalyptic events that HAVE occurred on this planet, so far they have all been completely natural. Epidemics (not man-made), meteors, super-volcanoes, etc.

For a fresh take on post-apocalypse, I really liked "Dies the Fire" by Stirling, where the "apocalypse" was an global, completely unexplained change in the laws of physics (electrical circuits no longer worked, and chemical reactions were no longer fast -- ie. no gunpowder, explosives, etc. and none of our modern technology worked anymore.)

The idea of "something has changed so that our modern society cannot function" and an exploration of what happens next, in other words, is something I find fresher than "we caused Global Warming: Oh the Humanity!"
 


Posted by rstegman (Member # 3233) on :
 
A lot of my story ideas, have things happen from atomic accelerator experiments.
My favorite is accelerating Bose-Einstein condensates of element 115 (that is one we have not found yet) or antiparticle atoms or molecules.
Usually, it opens up a portal to a new universe, which causes whatever I want to happen, to happen. With that start, nothing is impossible.

There is an Island off off Africa that is splitting apart. If half falls away, Florida would cease to exist, along with most of the east coast. It would make the Tsunamis of the Indian Ocean look like a ripple. you saw the effect of 911 and the recent scandals on world economy. consider if everything up to the Appalachians gone. There would be effects along the west coast of the Africa and possibly parts of Europe too What would that do to the world economy?
Placement of the disaster, however small, could devastate world economies.

One must realize that the Post Apocalyptic stories really have nothing to do with the cause of the disaster. It is all about people surviving the aftermath and what goes on from there. The only real effect of the type of disaster is that one might not go into certain areas for different reasons, such as radiation. Beyond that, these are really only survival stories and the cause is meaningless.
Try to start the story from the character in survival mode, the real start of the story, and not even mention the cause of the disaster. It could be that no one knows since there is no news at all.

I remember one scene of a post apocalyptic movie where the bikers were digging through the remains of the city. One of them said to the hero. "We are radiated. and we are active, so we must be radioactive."


 


Posted by extrinsic (Member # 8019) on :
 
The Postman, 1985, by David Brin resembles a post apocalyptic cliché. The movie more so, which conflated and simplified three of the original novel's motifs, as movies are wont to do. However, I felt that the novel avoided all the trite aspects of post apocalyptic clichés. One of the novel's main messages is that the citizenry causes the downfall of civilization.
 
Posted by dee_boncci (Member # 2733) on :
 
Well, not to be a stick in the mud, but the whole milieu of a post apocalyptic world could be considered a cliche.

It's interesting to note (but irrelavant)that the Greek root word from which apocalypse was derived means a "revealing or "unveiling" and has nothing to do with calamaties (except that calamaties happened to be what were revealed to John).

In the dozen-plus post-apocalyptic stories I've seen (movies) or read, the disaster served primarily to put modern people in what amounts to a medieval setting where violence becomes much more critical to problem solving. So I'd find a story where surviving people don't split into some type of tribes and fight for dominance a pleasant change.
 


Posted by annepin (Member # 5952) on :
 
quote:
I'm at a loss. Aren't "fingerless gloves" called "mittens?"

Indeed, no. Fingerless gloves are basically gloves that end at the knuckles, or have the last two joins of fingers cut off. Fingerless gloves require some portion of the finger to be exposed.

Mittens are a whole different species. Mittens cover the entire hand, including the fingers; only they encase the fingers in a single pocket (minus the thumb, which has its own pouch).
 


Posted by Brad R Torgersen (Member # 8211) on :
 
"I am gravely disappointed... Again, you have made me unleash my dogs of war."

-- Lord Humungus
 


Posted by Brad R Torgersen (Member # 8211) on :
 
"Another story would be to have where everybody is trying to prevent global warming, and accidentally cause global cooling where we enter another ice age."

FALLEN ANGELS by Niven, Pournelle, Barnes.

Remarkably good.
 


Posted by Cheyne (Member # 7710) on :
 
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"One of the novel's main messages is that the citizenry causes the downfall of civilization." (can't be bothered to figure out the UBB)
David Brin's novel was a great Post-apoc story the movie not so much.
Another message being that the solution was also in the hands of the citizenry.
Also that great things (like America) can be founded upon a lie.


 


Posted by extrinsic (Member # 8019) on :
 
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Posted by Cheyne (Member # 7710) on :
 
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Posted by Sherpa7 (Member # 8321) on :
 
No one has mentioned the disappearance of the honey bees as a likely cause for the coming apocalypse.

One movie I saw (about 1966) was Crack in the World in which a volcano was creating an unstoppable rift in the earth's crust. Scientists tried, unsuccessfully of course, to stop it and a cone-shaped chunk of the planet hurtled into space.

Something much better is the novel Alas, Babylon by Pat Frank (c.1959?) As this is so old, I don't believe that it was considered cliche at the time. This deals with the survival of a community in Florida after a nuclear war.

I have worn fingerless gloves years.
 


Posted by philocinemas (Member # 8108) on :
 
Nobody has mentioned cannibalism. I understand that's going to be fairly popular after civilization's demise.
 
Posted by Cheyne (Member # 7710) on :
 
I thought I did (mention cannibals) but that was in the 'Fimbulvinter' thread. 'Lucifer's Hammer' and 'The Road' are two post apocalypse novels that deal with it.
 
Posted by micmcd (Member # 7977) on :
 
The inexplicable full operational capacity of gun and ammunition manufacturing facilities.

I love that factories and corporations have long since ceased to exist, but everyone and their moms carry assault rifles with working 5.56mm bullets. This does, of course, make video games in post-apocalyptia more fun (thank you, Fallout 3). I'm not a gun expert, but I understand you need a fair amount of precision to make automatic weapons, as well as to make bullets that fire in anything more advanced than a musket. I'll buy that people can figure out how to make relatively small metal pellets and stuff gunpowder into a tube (assuming they have access to saltpetre...)

Also -- don't mean to set off a firestorm or anything, but I did a double-take at JudyMac's post earlier. Where are you getting your numbers -- 1 in 4 men are gay? I suspect gay men everywhere would rejoice if this were the case, and there would be a far more equitable set of rights if the oppressed population was 25% of the country.

This actually leads me to my other personal pet peeve of far-future writing, both apocalyptic and just plain-old-futurey: the absolute loosening of sexual "values" results in 1) apocalypse, 2) ennui, malaise, and godlessness (that often leads to apocalypse) that only the main character discovers a way out of. These plots tend to sound to me like "our kids have no respect" crossed with the fall of civilization. It's hard to read such a story and not hear "You kids get your keisters off my lawn!" echoing around my head.

1. It's been done to death.
2. It takes an overly simplistic view of youth and society as a whole.
3. It usually ignores the effects of religion (which often disappears in the book), <insert favorite STD>, and the quasi-cyclical nature of what people view as "values." All three of these things will likely be around until the end of humanity, even with the evil influences of that darn rock-&-roll music.

That people will think differently about sex in the future -- sure, I buy that. It's part of speculating the nature of the future to write about it. That they will have destroyed the world through sexual permissiveness, or at least created a world where half the people couldn't care less if it were to be destroyed? I don't think so. I think in any version of the future there will still be sex in the form of hippie love communes, modern traditional marriages, illicit homosexual encounters, and of course two teens sneaking out into the woods at a promise-keepers' "purity" convention.

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Posted by Zero (Member # 3619) on :
 
I'm more of a fallout 1 and 2 kind of guy. 3 was okay though, just ... not the same.
 
Posted by aspirit (Member # 7974) on :
 
I don't know whether or not they're cliches, but I can't stand apocalyptic stories where everyone's situation is hopeless or most of the characters we're expected to care for die after the start of the story.

My high school class read Alas, Babylon. Out of all the stories we read and watched about nuclear devastation, that's the one I actually enjoyed.


 


Posted by Kathleen Dalton Woodbury (Member # 59) on :
 
aspirit, then don't read Nevil Shute's ON THE BEACH.

Edited to add: I remember liking ALAS, BABYLON, too, but it's been a long time since I've read it.

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Posted by J (Member # 2197) on :
 
micmcd,

On the one hand, the tolerances on modern ammo are too tight for people to make anything useful from scratch. Too wide or long, won't fit the chamber, gun won't be fireable. Too short or thin, pressure will spike when the trigger is pulled and the gun (and possibly shooter) will be damaged, probably seriously.

On the other hand, people commonly make their own ammunition through a process called "reloading", in which you take fired brass, clean it and resize it, reload it with new gunpowder and primer, and pack a new bullet in the end. The equipment required to reload is mechanically simple.

It is entirely feasible for an individual to cast his own bullets, and (in a real pinch, and after a lot of dangerous experimentation) make his own gunpowder. It is the brass and primers that require advanced manufacturing processes.

Because there are millions of rounds of good brass extant (which can be reused 3 or 4 times) and a lot of primer caps that will remain good indefinitely, it is possible to have a Fallout 3 sort of future. The ammo supply would most likely run out when the last unfired primer cap was ignited.



 


Posted by Zero (Member # 3619) on :
 
Ah yes J, but what about the abundance of flame throwers and rocket-propelled grenade launchers that even common thugs have access to?
 
Posted by J (Member # 2197) on :
 
Ironically, a flame thrower is probably a lot more realistic to make at home (or whatever passes for home in a post-apocalyptic wasteland) than percussion cap ammunition.

As to the RPGs, you probably have a point.
 


Posted by micmcd (Member # 7977) on :
 
Thanks J -- I had no idea you could reuse bullet caps. I know virtually nothing about modern guns and ammo -- only that you can't just stick anything into a gun and expect it to fire in a nice straight line, and that there wasn't much room for error on a modern gun (5.56mm == clean shot, 5.8mm == gun jam / exploding hand surprise).
 
Posted by extrinsic (Member # 8019) on :
 
Fulminate percussion caps were introduced in the 1830s, before shell casings. Other methods were also used for igniting powder by percussion. The Maynard Roll was like a toy pistol's paper roll of caps, but with a more potent ignition source. Revolving magazines of brass percussion caps were also invented and used extensively. Barrel rifling came first, though, as early as the 15th Century, but didn't come into widespread application until about the same time as percussion caps. Other compounds besides fulminates have been used. In the early 20th Century so-called smokeless powders were made with perchlorates (white gunpowder) and/or nitrocellulose. The entire cartridge was filled with percussion-sensitive compound. They had a tendency to go off if handled roughly, though.

.22 bullets today don't have a percussion cap. The percussion-sensitive primer compound is poured into the casing before the powder.

None of the processes used to make bullets would defy preindustrial age technology. Given the need and the knowledge, a late bronze age technological level would suffice to make bullets, though steel age for the barrels. Reliability, range, and accuracy would not be as high, nor would full automatic weapons be reliable due to inherent inconsistency in casing sizing, but still plausible for a small and primitive manufactory to produce bullets. In the alternative, the latest advancement in fire delivery, Lead Storm's electic ignition technology, is relatively simple to reproduce.

Flame throwers are hazardous devices, even the best made modern ones have disastrous outcomes in inexperienced hands.

RPGs are also relatively simple to reproduce in otherwise primitive conditions. And, again, reliability, accuracy, and range would suffer, but if delivered on target, effectiveness would not be diminished. In Heinlein's Farnham's Freehold Farnham tipped homemade explosive projectiles with a friction-percussion senstive compound. Fortunately, Heinlein didn't accurately portray the chemical preparation. Authentic, but not sufficiently accurate for an amatuer chemist to make it.

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Posted by rstegman (Member # 3233) on :
 
Durning the Napolionic wars, Napolion was about to face air rifles that could load faster than gunpowder, fire farther, more accurately. He declared that anybody caught with an air rifle would be tortured to death.

Air rifle technology would be fairly easy to develop and quite effective and faster firing than guns. my only thought is of an air rifle based society, having to fire in space.....


 


Posted by Zero (Member # 3619) on :
 
I'm going to politely disagree with you on that point, extrinsic, because the RPG I handled (and no I didn't get to fire it) seemed incredibly sophisticated and delicate. Unlike pipebombs, which are still very prone to user/maker error, the grenade launcher just isn't something I can imagine you making in your garage. Maybe somoene can. But I'm not going to believe it until I see it.
 
Posted by extrinsic (Member # 8019) on :
 
An RPG requires four things, a launch tube, a ballistically stable grenade, a rocket proplusion engine, and a fuse mechanism. A heavy cardboard tube would do for a single launch or two. A perchlorate rocket fuel, like on a solid rocket booster, can be molded like plastic into a relatively precise engine and ignited by a simple fuse or electrical charge. A ballistically stable grenade is no harder to make than a conventional explosive projectile. A lathe-turned fragmentation casing would do. For a triggering fuse, a simple fulminate contact trigger would suffice. I won't say whether I've made and fired several, not in this post 9-11 age. I won't go into more detail either, for the same reasons. Suffice it to say, the making of the ingredients and materials from scratch is time-consuming and extremely dangerous. And there's a whole lot of tricks of the trade that make it slightly less so.
 
Posted by rich (Member # 8140) on :
 
One thing that hasn't been brought up is the mine-shaft gap that would undoubtedly arise from any apocalyptic scenarios. Also, I'm down with the 10-1 ratio of women to men. I don't know that The Gays would like those odds, but, hey, it's our future we're talking about.


 


Posted by Zero (Member # 3619) on :
 
What you're describing is sounding less and less like what appears in Fallout 3, and most other post-apoc fiction where RPG's are common place, that I've encountered.

I think common sense implies a few things.
1. It is harder to build things in post-apoc than it is now. materials are more scarce, etc. (This is situation dependent, but probably, usually true.)

2. If 1 is true, and RPG's are easy enough to make, as you imply, I think the police would be going against them more often now.

In other words "if it were so easy, more people would do it."

Having them around in P.A. stories isn't like... absurdly ridiculous or anything but, for me, it requires some additional suspension of disbelief.

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lol rich, that makes me think of Dr. Strangelove

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Posted by extrinsic (Member # 8019) on :
 
The thing is given the needed ingredients and incentives, RPGs are absurdly easy to make. However, most of the precursors or actual ingredients are controlled substances. Making RPGs, let alone possession of the precursors of RPGs, in most countries is illegal. In the U.S., simple possession of some of the precursors is a federal felony offense. Saltpeter and perchlorate used to be available over the counter at most pharmacies and apothecaries.

Just making black powder, the least needed grenade ingredient, nowadays is a heavily controlled industry. Before the discovery of one particular and counterintuitive safety protocol for making black powder, manufactories blew up all the time.

The early motion picture industry relied on a simple to make pre-petroleum age plastic film that was highly explosive and incendiary. Theaters burned down regularly before a more stable plastic was developed. The same material is common today as a primer compound in British munitions. The same material was used to make early 20th Century plastic objects. Faux turtleshell hairbrush handles, among other things, were made from it. It had a curious tendency to explode in extreme circumstances. Even fireworks manufacturing is heavily controlled in most countries. Heck, even some fertilizers are heavily controlled since the Oklahoma City Federal Building bombing.

It's far simpler, safer, and cheaper to buy RPGs on the gray or black market war zone weapons market than to make them. But they can be made in primitive conditions.
 


Posted by Cheyne (Member # 7710) on :
 
Rich: What is a mine-shaft gap? Where do you get the 10-1 ratio of which you speak? And who are The Gays? Is that a band? Never heard of them.
 
Posted by J (Member # 2197) on :
 
Extrinsic, look at history. 150 years ago, when manufacturing technology was significantly advanced over what you'd expect to find in a post-apocalypse world, the most advanced, most finely-made rifles had mechanical accuracy of 2 minutes of angle.

Today, just about any American rifle, no matter how cheap, will shoot to mechanical accuracy of about 1 minute of angle.

So while it would be possible to build something like a primitive rifle, and something like a primitive bomb launcher, p.a., it's not going to be possible to replicate the accuracy, reliability, and destructive force that make today's weapons so darn useful. You can't put a molotov cocktail in a slingshot and call it an RPG, even if the gross function is the same.

We CANNOT permit a mine-shaft gap.

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Posted by extrinsic (Member # 8019) on :
 
I am familiar with the history of firearms. The high explosive family of nitrated compounds is barely 160 years old. Fulminates, 200 years. In a real world situation, sure, homemade RPGs are unlikely to be as accurate or handy as modern-day weapons. But as far as the plausibility of making battlefield effective ones under primitive conditions, possible. Nor are the ingredients that difficult to make or find. Perchlorate and saltpeter, for example, can be found in fertile soils. In Elizabethan England, agents of the crown roamed the countryside seizing saltpeter from privately owned basement walls where it just leached out of the ground under hydrostatic pressure.

Zip guns used to be a commonplace criminal weapon. Not anymore, the criminal culture just doesn't know how to make one or prepare it for firing anymore, not when handguns are readily available on the street.
 


Posted by Zero (Member # 3619) on :
 
quote:
You can't put a molotov cocktail in a slingshot and call it an RPG, even if the gross function is the same.

LOL, oh now I know where they got the name Wrist Rocket!

 
Posted by rich (Member # 8140) on :
 
Cheyne,
Sorry, I was trying to be funny, and not doing too good a job of it (my thanks to Zero, though). The mine-shaft gap and the 10-1 ratio is from Dr. Strangelove. If you haven't seen the movie, drop whatever you're doing, even if you're currently giving CPR to someone while reading this message board, stop CPR and reading this message board, and go to Blockbuster or Netflix and watch the movie.

The Gays was just me being idiotic. I saw someone posit the 1 in 4 people are gay thing, which strikes me as kinda high, and made a feeble attempt at humor. And I wasn't even drinking at the time.

So, Scout's Honor, I will no longer attempt to be funny unless I'm drunk. At least that way I'll have an excuse.
 


Posted by Zero (Member # 3619) on :
 
No, I liked it! Be funny. Be funny.
 
Posted by philocinemas (Member # 8108) on :
 
It's been several years since I last watched Dr. Strangelove. Rich, you've inspired me to watch it again sometime this week. And I agree with Zero; don't quit the humor.
 
Posted by Cheyne (Member # 7710) on :
 
Rich: By all means be funny. As you had capitalised 'The Gays' I thought that it was a proper noun, didn't know if I had missed something. (careful though, your joke was wandering close to unPC)

I googled the mine shaft gap and was illucidated. I have seen Dr. Strangelove, of course, but it was about 20 years ago and I had forgotten the dialogue I will have to pause from administering CPR long enough to see it again.

Another PA cliche-- utopian/distopian enclaves.
Beneath the Planet of the Apes- A Boy and His Dog-

Amazing how a simple question about cliches could get so big. I am pondering writing a very cliche filled post-apoc story just to take advantage of it all.
 


Posted by Brad R Torgersen (Member # 8211) on :
 
Let's not forget mutant, giant-sized insects and other, ordinarily small animals.

Ants. Spiders. Rats. You name it.

My apologies if this got mentioned before?
 


Posted by steffenwolf (Member # 8250) on :
 
Brad,
your points relates closely to one of my favorite topics, comic books. Why is it that in comic books (and post-apocalyptic stories), radiation so often has so many positive effects? Super size, super strength, wall-climbing abilities, spider-sense? Why don't any of these comic books ever start out with the hair failing out and the skin decaying? I suppose it would make it hard to make a series out of it if the hero dies from radiation poisoning right in the beginning.
 
Posted by rich (Member # 8140) on :
 
I think Alan Moore asked that same question, Steffenwolf, when he created Dr. Manhattan.

The greatest word that solves all problems in comic books, though, is: SOMEHOW.

Peter Parker managed to get bit by a radioactive spider that SOMEHOW transferred its DNA to him.

SOMEHOW Reed Richards and company didn't die when exposed to radiation.

Bruce Banner SOMEHOW survived a gamma ray(?!!) explosion and SOMEHOW manages to keep his pants on even though every other piece of clothing doesn't make it through the transformation.

SOMEHOW it's good stuff.
 


Posted by Brad R Torgersen (Member # 8211) on :
 
Great points, regarding lethal radiation producing super-hero powers.

I am reminded of that greatest of all B-movie heroes, The Toxic Avenger!
 


Posted by Robert Nowall (Member # 2764) on :
 
As I recall...it's something that grew out of pre-WWII SF. Generally a more benign view of radiation was held---they understood that radiation caused mutations, but did not appreciate that it also caused radiation sickness and death. Couple that with the superhero comics, and, bango! radiation exposure caused mutations which created beings with superpowers.

SF proper grew out of it fast enough---but the comics never did.

(I had just been thinking of posting a complaint about mutant superpowers, but when I got here, I see you guys were ahead of me.)
 


Posted by steffenwolf (Member # 8250) on :
 
OMG, the Toxic Avenger. That movie was on cable a week or two ago. Never seen it before. I think it may be one of the worst I've ever seen. And I've seen some real stinkers.

And regarding mutations in comic books again (forgive the slight sidetrack), why are all mutations in those stories useful? razor-sharp claws, powers of flight, weather-control, super-strength?

I don't like Piers Anthony's Xanth stories in most respects, but I did like one thing about them. EVERYONE in Xanth had powers, but that doesn't mean that those powers were useful. For instance, there were some people who could make a purplish spot appear on the wall, and that was it.

OK, sidetrack over, carry on.
 


Posted by rich (Member # 8140) on :
 
Forgive me for the continual hijack, but following in that vein I gotta add...

Matter Eater Lad. Seriously. Was his nemesis Tums? Pepcid? (And didn't he die by eating a black hole or something? The thing is, Matter Eater Lad could be a really cool concept for a sci-fi horror story.)
 


Posted by Robert Nowall (Member # 2764) on :
 
I remember one line from a list of Bart Simpson's Biggest Beefs: Years of exposure to radiation, but no cool superpowers...
 
Posted by micmcd (Member # 7977) on :
 
Not that I'm addicted to this humor site or anything, but since it is so on topic to the "why does radiation always seem to be awesome in comics" question:

http://www.cracked.com/article_15049_marvel-comics-vs-science-5-most-absurd-superhero-origins.html


 


Posted by Toby Western (Member # 7841) on :
 
quote:
I remember one line from a list of Bart Simpson's Biggest Beefs: Years of exposure to radiation, but no cool superpowers...

I guess the ability to glow in the dark doesn't count
 


Posted by philocinemas (Member # 8108) on :
 
Let me first say that I am not offended at all by the fun often poked at comic books. It is well-deserved. However, in my view, these books actually serve a very healthy purpose in out times. Comic book superheros represent a form of modern mythology. Though society has abandoned the belief in multiple gods and larger-than-life heroes, there is still a craving for morally superior beings, justice that surpasses an inadequate legal system, and the fantastic. Comic books serve this need and have used whatever seasoning of science they can sprinkle on the stories to give them the taste of believability. It is an iteresting blend of science fiction and fantasy, and I dare say they are often just as believable as many of the things I have read in either genre.
 
Posted by steffenwolf (Member # 8250) on :
 
philocinemas, I agree.
I love superheroes and comic books. I'm poking fun at them as a fan.
 


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