The wall I keep slamming into has more to do with having confidence that I am writing 'right' than having material, time, drive, imagination, etc. I have been in on the topic conversations about what defines 'right' and feel like I understand that a 'right way' is definable. Based upon the critique action here at Hatrack, I can be sure that I have a gap in my formal learn'n.
Have you folks utilized private, hired tutors? Does this seem like a waste of time and money?
Thanks, dr
While I think it is good to have a close advisor/critiquer who can be truly honest with you, I don't think a tutor is necessarily the answer. That's where writing groups and this forum are good. If you want to get a range of opinion, just join the WotF critique group - if you're considering going for WotF, and you'll get some great feedback. But the range is the important thing. When you have points in a story that everyone keeps catching as a problem, then you know you did something wrong there. The group thing helps you get perspective on your work that a single person can't.
As I said though, I do believe in a good advisor. OSC advocates finding a 'smart' reader and training them to give the kind of critique you're looking for. I haven't 'trained' anyone, but my best reader knows my shortcomings and isn't afraid to point them out.
But if you're at a level where you really feel you need the help, for your own peace of mind, then maybe hire someone to go over one or two of your best stories and see what they say. But as a general rule, I think you can do it on your own - with a little help from your friends.
My local public library employs a "writer-in-residence", a tenured professional author who's duties involve helping less experienced authors with their writing, either via email or by appointment. I've taken advantage of this service and it was an extremely good experience.
They also offer several free writing workshops throughout the year, though you have to pre-register and they fill up fast.
If you happen to be a student, many universities have free writing tutors available. My husband worked in one of these centres a few years ago, and it was a great resource for students.
I would suggest you check your local library, leisure-guide, community centres and universities for free or cheap writing resources if you are still interested in professional guidance.
Consider musical composition; it's in many ways defined by structure, and that structure is itself defined by the way the audience reacts to the music. And then, the most brilliantly composed piece of music is just a bunch of black dots on the page without a consummate artist to play it - and when they play it with a combination of flawless technical brilliance and their own heartfelt interpretation, it rises above its peers and is noticed by the crowd. A good musician - composer or performer - immerses themselves in music. They never stop listening to it, performing it, teaching it, talking about it. They listen and appreciate music across genres (Ever heard a heavy metal rock band talk about classical music? Ever wonder where they get some of their influences?) And also, interestingly, there are a great many famous musicians who don't have any formal musical training at all.
Writing requires you to be both the composer and the performer. You have to structure a story to evoke a reaction in the reader. You have to perform it flawlessly - for on publication your performance can't be recanted - and with the voice that is truly yours. You don't need formal writing training. You need that same immersion the musician has. Read - and read critically. And when you don't feel you're learning something with the books you're reading, push yourself to read something more challenging. See what other genres are doing, and why they're doing it well.
Personally, I think a music education is a great primer for writing. But it only points the way - the real meat of learning to write must be immersing yourself in the world of literature.
So no, I wouldn't want to pay a tutor. If, however, you're seeking advancement in your own skill level, how about considering a writing workshop instead? Your local library might offer one, or many successful authors offer them, and many conferences include some level of "pro-writer" workshop tracks.
Good luck!
As for Hatrack; even though this is one of the coolest sites I know about and the people here are very intelligent and involved, there is a limit to what can be gained by this type of interaction. It is not totally conducive to 'going to the next level' with learning. i.e. - not much follow-up action for ongoing questions. Critique(ing) is not the same as instruction and practice, it leaves you with more questions than answers.
BenM makes a great point about the parallel with music. To take it one step further; As a veteran instructor I have seen droves of guitar players who have done everything they could do to get better but simply could not break over into the 'smooth, seamless, sweet sounding flow' that we associate with the pros. A few come with the 'mojo' already built in, most do not. After a couple of months with me in an intensive hands-on-the-fretboard blitz, they are done with private instructors forever and understand the 'thing' in their bones. As for me, I played professionally for two+ decades before I ever had a single lesson and sure 'nuf I could wail. Been playing now for 40 years and can say that the private study allowed me to fully transcend what I was doing before.
THAT is what I'm talking about. I don't see that happening here or from reading another 'done-it' book. The help I have found at this site has been priceless and on a scale of 1 - 10 is running about 7.5.
It just seems to me that a little one on one time with someone trained in the craft would allow me to direct the focus and solve some of my lingering problems.
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Honestly, the best way to learn to write, is to write, and read a lot. This is also what will build your confidence.
Was going to post my opinion, but I saw someone already did that for me.
It does come easier if you have a really solid grasp of grammar, to where it's automatic.
Diagramming sentences is useful, because it'll show you right away where you've got something overstuffed. In my observation, overstuffing is the usual issue as people try to figure out this "show not tell" thing, and add all sorts of spurious "to me" and "in it" and "I saw that" and "he felt that" ... which will dangle off one end or the other of the diagram, making the trim point obvious.
What was the question?
Let's see...(dig, dig)...here's some info and an e-mail link for him:
http://www.stanwax.plus.com/writersark/tutors/terryedge.htm
You can go to a local college and purchase a decent grammar book - I haven't seen one elsewhere, except for The Chicago Manual of Style, which I do not believe has a practice section. Even then, modern fiction does not follow grammar and punctuation rules precisely. I believe it is useful information to know, but not a necessity in today's literary environment.
It has been twenty years since I graduated from college, and some of what I learned has become foggy at best. I went many years without writing or communicating with other writers. Hatrack has been very instrumental in reviving and clarifying past knowledge. If I were you, I would not hire a tutor, but instead, invest in a decent grammar book and thesaurus. It sounds like you have been reading other types of writing books dealing with theme and style; I suspect these steps, as well as finding a very reliable first reader, would be sufficient.
[This message has been edited by philocinemas (edited March 05, 2011).]
As to the Chicago Manual of Style...
http://www.cherryh.com/www/panel_room.htm
go down to DO YOU HATE S'S?
(I don't know Terry, by the way, other than because I approached him for writing feedback.)
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Recently various American publishers adopted the Chicago manual of style as the official standard for their copyeditors.
- C.J. Cherryh
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Even then, modern fiction does not follow grammar and punctuation rules precisely. I believe it is useful information to know, but not a necessity in today's literary environment.
- Philo