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Posted by Kakichi (Member # 5814) on :
Would anyone be interested in reading my (novel) so far as I've written? I could use a critique of the entire story as it is now. As mentioned, it is 9200 words right now set in a fantasy environment. Please let me know and I'll send you what I've got so far. Thanks!

August 10, 2007 EDIT
Ok, it's just finishing up its third or fourth revision and most importantly, this part of the story is complete. Anyone interested in reading it? I'd appreciate one last bit of feedback before I tuck it away during school and work on the next part.

Shoot me an email at and I'll get you a copy by the end of this weekend. Thanks in advance and enjoy!
Story info: Fantasy; approx 12000 words;

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Posted by writeratheart (Member # 5758) on :
why don't you post the first thirteen on here?
but yeah sure I'll take a peek if you like
Posted by Kakichi (Member # 5814) on :
I have posted the first 13 in the above forum with all the others. And I've sent it off to ya, hope you enjoy what I've got so far!


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