Here are the first 13 lines: please let me know if you'd be interested in reviewing the entire prologue.
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Shimmering light from the new moon danced lazily on the surface of the lake. As the last vestiges of sunlight melted behind the distant peaks of the Lorai Mountains, the low reflections belied the dimming sky, illuminating the small cove and the man standing before a lone ivy-covered headstone.
He had seen the day pass in such a manner countless times since his boyhood, though the last two decades had seen him absent, something in the pattern unique to the world of his birth brought him peace. He reached out to the headstone and eased the plant life away from the words, 'MaiLeah Cellen, 3024-3055 Beloved wife and mother', though the last words were still covered by the undergrowth, they were forever written in his memory.
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Good luck.
The last vestiges of sunlight melted behind the distant peaks of the Lorai Mountains, illuminating the small lake cove and the man kneeling before a lone ivy-covered headstone.
'MaiLeah Cellen, 3024-3055 Beloved wife and mother' The man's fingers traced the contours of the engraved letters, though the last words were still covered by the undergrowth, they were forever in his memory.
"She was a rather beautiful woman wasn't she Janek?" questioned a graveled voice behind him.
The man kneeling before the headstone turned and stood, his eyes fixing on the intruding voices’ owner in an angry stare.
"Why are you here Feyhen?"