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Posted by Raider (Member # 8871) on :
 
Hello everyone. I'm currently working on a novel and I have a rough draft of the first chapter already written. I'm looking for some constructive criticism. The first chapter is available on my personal website.

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I welcome any comments and suggestions. Feel free to leave them here or in my guestbook. Thank you.
 



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