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Author Topic:   Hatrack Inn II
Aidan
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posted November 22, 2005 11:52 AM     Click Here to See the Profile for Aidan   Click Here to Email Aidan     Edit/Delete Message
Aidan fought to contain her giggle; she settled on a pleasing smile instead. What well-bred manners! She stood up and swept into the deepest cursty she could manage without toppling over. "Master Leo, it's my pleasure to make your acquaintance." She looked at the man holding Leo's arm. "You look familiar to me. Have we met?"

(OOC--Aidan met the Thrifts in the bar with Rider, but if you'd like, we can say they haven't met, since Honey and Rider no longer seem to be posting.)

Walker
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posted November 22, 2005 02:41 PM     Click Here to See the Profile for Walker   Click Here to Email Walker     Edit/Delete Message
Juan nodded as he released Leo's arm but kept near him. "Yeah, you met me, my wife, and our brother with Rider, remember? We're staying with a man named Avery right now, and Leo here is his charge."

Avery Good Schreibner
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posted November 23, 2005 03:46 PM     Click Here to See the Profile for Avery Good Schreibner   Click Here to Email Avery Good Schreibner     Edit/Delete Message
"Yes Ma'am! Yes ma'am! And these is two of the finest men, Mistuh Schreibner and this heah Mistuh...." He'd forgotten. "They do right. Sho' do. Yes ma'am. Wall, I'll jes git that fer you. It's...." He looked up at Juan. "It's jes over yonder a pace, I's sho." He stepped cautiously sideways a step and looked up at Juan. Then he hopped and set out screaming around the corner of the Inn.

Walker
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posted November 23, 2005 07:47 PM     Click Here to See the Profile for Walker   Click Here to Email Walker     Edit/Delete Message
Juan nodded, unsurprised. "If you'll excuse me, he really shouldn't be running amok. Oh, and I'm Juan Hoja-Thrift, by the way."

He turned and walked calmly, though quickly off the porch and around the side of the building, following Leo's tracks, easily visible in the untrodden earth off Main Street.

Avery Good Schreibner
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posted November 24, 2005 06:10 PM     Click Here to See the Profile for Avery Good Schreibner   Click Here to Email Avery Good Schreibner     Edit/Delete Message
Leo was churning up dust and pebbles as he pumped his arms and legs as fast as he could pump. He knew he didn't have time to turn and look. A full growed man's legs were twice his and could cover twice the ground. He wove his way between trees, outbuildings, a thing left here or there, horse turds - he couldn't stand that between his toes - and he didn't stop till he was at the river. There, then, he allowed himself to look back and didn't see anyone coming. So, he picked out a good spot, turned around in it a couple times, and sat down. He just happened to be near the tavern.

Aidan
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posted November 24, 2005 08:43 PM     Click Here to See the Profile for Aidan   Click Here to Email Aidan     Edit/Delete Message
"Oh that's right!" Aidan remembered now. "Nice seeing you again, Mister Thrift." When his young charge bolted, Aidan hid her smile behind her hand. "Best of luck to ye, catching that one." She watched both disappear, giggled, and then entered the inn.

Aidan approached the desk slowly, taking in all the sights around her. This place would do quite nicely.

Firestorm
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posted December 07, 2005 06:29 AM     Click Here to See the Profile for Firestorm   Click Here to Email Firestorm     Edit/Delete Message
The stranger walked down the street, slightly disappointed with the pub. What kind of service was that?
He lifted the brim of his worn hat (not enough to show his face) and looked up at the modest building before him. The Hatrack Inn, looked nice enough, and there were plenty of folk millin' about. Can't be too bad.
He brought his hat back down to its customary position and walked on toward the inn. He'll need a place to hunker down for the night and hopefully find some work in the mornin'. But the man knew this was too much to hope for, most likely he'd be hittin' the road again tomorrow. That's what it's always been since Tombstone.

Jeffy Caballero
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posted December 07, 2005 05:53 PM     Click Here to See the Profile for Jeffy Caballero   Click Here to Email Jeffy Caballero     Edit/Delete Message
It was starting to get dark, and lights were already visible throught the windows of the Inn. Jeffy stood stock still for a while, and anyone walking by would think him to be a statue. But inside his head was raging a fierce debate between going inside and asking after some of the folks he had letters for and just sneaking out to the small stable and spending the night with the horses. It had been so long, he figured some of the folks he was looking for didn't even live in Hatrack anymore, and his asking after them was bound to raise questions that he didn't feel up to avoiding tonight. So, the horses won, and he started out toward the stable, hoping not to be noticed by anyone until morning, at least.

Firestorm
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posted December 08, 2005 04:15 AM     Click Here to See the Profile for Firestorm   Click Here to Email Firestorm     Edit/Delete Message
The stranger stopped short of the door, his hand hovering just above the knob. Through the corner of his eye, he saw movement.
Tilting his head ever so slightly, he shot a glance at what caught his attention. A single figure, probably a man, heading toward the stables.
'Now why would a body leave a perfectly good inn to sleep with the horses?'
The stranger turned away from the door and quietly followed. Things could get interestin', and the stranger was bored...

Jeffy Caballero
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posted December 08, 2005 12:28 PM     Click Here to See the Profile for Jeffy Caballero   Click Here to Email Jeffy Caballero     Edit/Delete Message
Jeffy heard someone following him and stole a glance over his shoulder. The man was dressed like a horseman, so he was probably coming to check on his horse. No problem, Jeffy could disappear in the shadows until the stranger was gone. Something didn't seem right, however... The horses. When a horse heard his master coming, he'd either calm down a bit or get a little bit more scared, depending on what sort of person his master was. All of these horses had the same fears any horse has when a stranger is approaching, but none had any changes that come when they recognize the person approaching, and horses always know. If he's not heading over here for a horse, did he see me? A quick check of the man's fear revealed that whatever he was afraid of, it wasn't Jeffy...

Firestorm
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posted December 08, 2005 10:03 PM     Click Here to See the Profile for Firestorm   Click Here to Email Firestorm     Edit/Delete Message
The stranger stopped at the door of the stable. His large black figure casting a long shadow across the floor. His eyes, veiled by shadow, scanned the stable. He strained his ears, but to no avail. The damned horses were makin' a ruckus, and whoever he was followin' probably knew he was there now.
"What the hell," the stranger shrugged and walked on in. It's not like the kid had enough time to set up traps or anythin'. "He can't hide in here forever, and when he comes out, we're gonna have a little chat."

Jeffy Caballero
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posted December 09, 2005 12:50 AM     Click Here to See the Profile for Jeffy Caballero   Click Here to Email Jeffy Caballero     Edit/Delete Message
Jeffy tried desperately to calm the horses, but his own fear was becoming overwhelming, and if there was one thing he knew, fear was awful contagious, especially to animals.
Who was that man? He didn't own any of the horses, but Jeffy realized that that didn't mean he didn't own the stable! Or the Inn, for that matter. What if he suspected Jeffy was a thief... or worse? At any rate, he just saw a kid he'd never seen before sneak into a stable that he might own. Jeffy had grown up in a place where folks got shot for acting suspiciously, and he had no reason to think Hatrack would be any different.
Without realizing he'd even decided to do it, Jeffy stepped right out into the open, making sure to keep his empty hands in plain sight. Nothing like facing your fear to make it go away... or exchange it for an even bigger fear...

Firestorm
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posted December 09, 2005 10:02 AM     Click Here to See the Profile for Firestorm   Click Here to Email Firestorm     Edit/Delete Message
The stranger relaxed his hand, but outwardly he looked no different. Under the shadow of his hat, he gave the kid a once-over. No weapons, no harm. Time for the chat.
Reaching into his coat, he pulled out a long cigar and bit off the end. Clamping the cylinder between his teeth, he struck a match and lit the stick. The faint red glow of the match momentarily illuminated his face, revealing his sharp features, unkempt stubble, and piercing brown eyes. He savored the taste as he shook the match, extinguishing its light.
He circled the kid, inhaling the fragrance of the cigar and blowing out smoke rings. Anything to look non-chalant. This was somethin' he learned a long time ago: if you're not afraid, the other guy WILL be.
'Right now, I need this kid shakin' in his boots.'
"Might fine night, ain't it?" he asked, his voice a slow raspy drawl.
He fixed his eyes on the boy, hoping the draw an answer not only from his reply.

Aidan
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posted December 09, 2005 02:12 PM     Click Here to See the Profile for Aidan   Click Here to Email Aidan     Edit/Delete Message
Aidan heard whinnies from outside. They sounded frightened, and Aidan was torn between places. She wanted to go and make sure the horses were all right, but she knew she could look suspicious doing so, seeing as how she wasn't a guest at the Inn. After a moment's deliberation, she approached the desk, and rang the little bell. The quicker she got this over with, the sooner she could go out to the stable.

Jeffy Caballero
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posted December 09, 2005 07:37 PM     Click Here to See the Profile for Jeffy Caballero   Click Here to Email Jeffy Caballero     Edit/Delete Message
Jeffy didn't know what to say, so he just shrugged and grinned, and hoped the stranger would figure he didn't speak English or was mute or simple. He'd never been so scared in his life, and he never realized how much his own fear clouded his own knack's ability to read the fears of others. He was starting to worry that maybe this stranger wasn't the proprietor of the Inn at all, and he realized that there was nobody else in sight to witness... whatever happened...

Firestorm
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posted December 09, 2005 08:56 PM     Click Here to See the Profile for Firestorm   Click Here to Email Firestorm     Edit/Delete Message
'This kid's quakin' in his boots all right,' the stranger thought to himself, 'but he ain't answerin' my question.'
The tall man stepped closer to the boy, careful to make sure that he towered over the kid in just the right way. He didn't want to look like he was about to murder the kid, but he DID want the little guy to know that he meant business.
He stepped close to the boy and stooped. Removing the cigar from his lips, he blew a mouthful of whipsy white smoke toward the kid's face, causing him to cough and sputter. Taking his moment of distraction, the stranger carefully studied the boy's face.
'Hm... looks like a Southie. Maybe he doesn't speak American. Ah hell, there's a way to fix that.'
He let the boy's wide eyes stare at his overshadowed face for a moment. Then, he slowly opened his mouth and let his words slide out, deep and raspy,
"Como te llamas, chico?"

Jeffy Caballero
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posted December 10, 2005 12:33 PM     Click Here to See the Profile for Jeffy Caballero   Click Here to Email Jeffy Caballero     Edit/Delete Message
Jeffy's heart sunk. He had played the one card he had, and it had failed. The stranger spoke Spanish, forcing his hand. Oh, well, when your choices are stripped from you, at least you don't have to waste time wondering what to do next.

"Senor, me llamo Jeffy. Lo siento, senor, no quiero molestar a nadie, solo tengo sueno y no tengo dinero para dormir adentro del meson. Me puedo dormir con los caballos?"

(OOC: I'm not sure how to use accents and tildes and upside down question marks on the board...)

Aidan
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posted December 13, 2005 12:33 AM     Click Here to See the Profile for Aidan   Click Here to Email Aidan     Edit/Delete Message
When no one came to the front desk right off, Aidan's anxiety grew. Now what? She looked around, hoping to see someone, anyone, who might know where she could get a room. She kept her worries from her face, but anyone looking right at her would be able to see it clearly in her expressive green eyes.

Will Song
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posted December 13, 2005 10:41 AM     Click Here to See the Profile for Will Song   Click Here to Email Will Song     Edit/Delete Message
Willow Song hobbled in to the Inn seeing that the woman did not exit. Will, they called him. Though he was affected with the rheumatism in his legs and the arthritus in his hands, the decay of the years in his teeth and the cloud of cataracts in his eyes, the green sap of the willow still ran through his veins.

He was always up and about at the crack of dawn and humming to the fire in the evening.

Folks said Will was as old as the hills and about as stupid. Not to point any fingers, though, those folks, at least where Will's smarts were concerned were fooled. "Cain't never judge a book by its cover," Willow so often said, followed right after by a chuckle. And, Will knew.

He knew how old the hills were and he knew books. Mostly, though, he knew people.

Preachers said he would make an excellent preacher. Willow said, "Be a Baptist," and paused for just a breath of time before going on, "or be a preacher." That dumbfounded the preacher, pretty much ended the conversation, and let Will get on his way.

Business men said Will should have been a business man. Will said, "If I had a nickel for ever' time I heard that, I'd be a rich man looking for someone to give me more money." The business man, if he were wise, thought there may be a grain of truth in that somewhere. Otherwise, he just thought Will was stupid. In either case, Will would set off on his way.

The Indians said he could have been an Indian. Will said, "could be," for he thought all their sage, homey wisedom parceled together made a good deal of sense.

Willow felt both happy and sad for town folk like those in Hatrack. They enjoyed oneanother's company for both joy and miserable reasons. He said, "A miserable man loves miserable company."

Some other folks just coldn't help being lonely. They didn't have the gift of gab or the spirit in them that would get them to exercise their own will. He said, "There will always be the haves and the have-nots."

In either case, Will was around to provide what he could. He'd heard it said, "There but by the Grace of God go I." He felt that in his bones. In some way or other, he was that man or that woman in need of something. Will always had atleast something.

"Evenin', misses," he said hobbling up to the counter to lean his elbow. "I've not seen a soul operating this business for a good while. 'Sides, if you're looking for a place to stay, most anyone in town has more room than they know what to do with. They're all kindly folk and would most generally be happy to board you."

Jeffy Caballero
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posted December 13, 2005 11:30 AM     Click Here to See the Profile for Jeffy Caballero   Click Here to Email Jeffy Caballero     Edit/Delete Message
Waiting for the stranger to reply, Jeffy realized that all of his reasons for avoiding the inn were pretty much trumped by the situation he found himself in now. If the man was the proprietor of the inn, might as well talk to him inside. If not, well, they could talk inside just the same, and he'd prefer to have other folks around for once.
Jeffy watched the man's eyes, waiting for a moment of distraction that would let him make a bolt for the door of the inn...

Aidan
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posted December 13, 2005 07:40 PM     Click Here to See the Profile for Aidan   Click Here to Email Aidan     Edit/Delete Message
Aidan started; she'd been so preoccupied looking for the owner of the inn, she hadn't paid any attention to anything else around her. "Oh! I'm so sorry, I didn't see you there!" She paused a moment to catch her thoughts, most of which were flying right out her ears. She smiled, and continued, "Thank you for that advice. I really do appreciate it."

Her smile faltered; now what was she to do? Miss Honey had left Hatrack, so there was no chance of boarding at the charm school again. The only other person she knew in town was Ahavah, and Aidan couldn't bring herself to ask the kind woman to take on another mouth to feed. "I suppose," she thought to herself, "I could go back to living in the Open. It wasn't so bad. And if it gets cold, I can always sneak into a barn or such for the night."

She cheered a little at this, smiled at the man again, and headed for the door. At least she could find out what was going on in the barn now.

[This message has been edited by Aidan (edited December 13, 2005).]

Jeffy Caballero
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posted December 14, 2005 11:34 AM     Click Here to See the Profile for Jeffy Caballero   Click Here to Email Jeffy Caballero     Edit/Delete Message
Jeffy saw the shadow of someone approaching the door to the inn from the inside. This might be it, he thought. As soon as the door opens, the stranger will have to turn to see who it is, or at least be distracted. Jeffy got ready to run.

Aidan
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posted December 14, 2005 02:22 PM     Click Here to See the Profile for Aidan   Click Here to Email Aidan     Edit/Delete Message
As soon as she stepped out of the inn, Aidan wasted no time getting down the steps, and headed as quick as her feet would carry her. The thought occured to her about half way across the yard that this may not be the brightest of ideas. Her mother's chiding echoed in her head, "Always be making sure you know where you're headed before you actually get there!" Oops...oh well. Too late for that now.

Jeffy Caballero
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posted December 14, 2005 03:39 PM     Click Here to See the Profile for Jeffy Caballero   Click Here to Email Jeffy Caballero     Edit/Delete Message
It happened: as the hinges on the door creaked the stranger turned his head every so slightly to his right, and the split second that his focus wavered was all the time Jeffy needed to dash past him on his left. What Jeffy hadn't counted on was the young woman who opened the door running so quickly right toward them... and with no time to slow down, Jeffy slammed right into her and they landed together on the cold, hard ground at the stranger's feet. Jeffy was not surprised to sense the strong fear that looking at the stranger aroused in the girl, but he was surprised to discover that she was not afraid for herself at all, only for Jeffy. For some reason, her fear was comforting, though it did nothing to change the fact that the two of them were equally at the mercy of the man in black who was still standing over them.

Aidan
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posted December 14, 2005 06:32 PM     Click Here to See the Profile for Aidan   Click Here to Email Aidan     Edit/Delete Message
Aidan watched as everything around her moved in slow motion. She saw a boy bolt from the stables and run right at her. She realized what was going to happen, and groaned inwardly. "This is not going to be--oof!" she thought as they collided.

The ground was hard, and Aidan had to bite her tongue to stem the tide of Irish curses threatening to spill out of her. Then she looked up at the man who stood over her and the boy. The icy fingers of dread clutched her insides, and she felt as if she was frozen to the spot where she sat.

Jeffy Caballero
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posted December 14, 2005 07:36 PM     Click Here to See the Profile for Jeffy Caballero   Click Here to Email Jeffy Caballero     Edit/Delete Message
Jeffy knew he couldn't leave a woman alone with a man like this, although he couldn't imagine what help a boy his age would be able to offer if any help was needed. At the very least, he was a witness.
Suddenly, he realized that the door to the inn was still open. He couldn't go for help, but maybe help would come to them. He opened his mouth to shout, "Oh, my leg!" and remembered just in time that he wasn't supposed to be able to speak English. He gripped his perfectly fine and uninjured shin and cried out at the top of his voice, "Ay, mi pierna! Ayudame!"

Will Song
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posted December 15, 2005 03:09 PM     Click Here to See the Profile for Will Song   Click Here to Email Will Song     Edit/Delete Message
Will threw up his hands as if to say here I go again. He hobbled out to the front porch of the Inn. "Misses, you look a little down and out.

"Buenos dias, muchatito," he said to the boy and bending over the two sprawled on the ground.

"Such an unbecoming situation for a lady," he said lending a hand. "But, sometimes life requires a view from another station. Might I suggest looking over at the town bulletin board at the post office for offers to boarders. After that, we could ask in at the pub. There's bound to be someone here in town with a spare room - even for a young caballero," he said with a nod to the boy.

Jeffy Caballero
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posted December 15, 2005 04:28 PM     Click Here to See the Profile for Jeffy Caballero   Click Here to Email Jeffy Caballero     Edit/Delete Message
Jeffy did all he could to avoid reacting to what the old man was saying. At this point it was enough to know that the stranger seemed to have lost interest in Jeffy for now. He had to make sure that either the young woman or the old man took him with them when they left: he didn't care to spend another moment in the stranger's presence alone.
For the moment, he thought he'd prefer the young woman's company. True, he was old enough to find the company of an attractive girl exciting, but there was more to it than that. He didn't like the way the old man had addressed him as "Caballero." Maybe he was just being paranoid, but it sounded like the old man might be addressing him by name, not just being polite. He was worried this old man might know more about him than he ought to, though he knew that he had never seen him before in his life.
He stood up and motioned toward the front door of the inn, and gave the girl a questioning look, carefully avoiding the gaze of their elderly protector.
"Please, senorita, we go here? Be cleaning to self?" He winced, but he had no idea how a non-English speaker would butcher the language. He just hoped his butchery didn't render him incomprehensible.

Aidan
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posted December 16, 2005 11:52 AM     Click Here to See the Profile for Aidan   Click Here to Email Aidan     Edit/Delete Message
It never ceased to amaze Aidan how much chaos could happen in just a few short moments.

The boy cried out in Spanish, and Aidan only recognized the word for help. The old man who had spoken to her inside came out and offered her a hand. "Such an unbecoming situation for a lady," he chuckled. Aidan grinned, and let him help her up. She kept a wary eye on the man in black, and offered a hand to the boy she'd run into. When he spoke to her in broken English, her heart melted. "Yes, we'll go. But I have something I need to do first." She pulled him to his feet as gently as she could, then put his hand on the old man's arm.

Aidan turned to face the stranger. Her infamous Irish temper was at high boil now, and all common sense had left her. She stormed over to the man, fire dancing in her green eyes. An overwhelming desire to slap him across the face began to bubble up inside her, but she wasn't tall enough to reach. Instead, Aidan settled for asking him a few pressing questions. Somewhere inside, a little voice advised, "Keep your head, Aidan. Don't go sticking your foot in your mouth." But Aidan had never been very good at listening...

"Just who do you think you are, scaring a poor boy out of his mind like that? You should be ashamed of yourself! What did you say to him? And what exactly were you doing in the barn anyways?"

It was about this time that Aidan's mind caught up with her mouth, and as quickly as the tirade had come, it stopped. It occured to her that this man was most likely armed and probably wouldn't take too kindly to a mere 17 year old scolding him as if he were a child. She gulped, but kept her glare steady on him. Aidan still had plently of anger, but she'd been doused with a helping of cold fear, which brought the fire of her temper under control.

[This message has been edited by Aidan (edited December 16, 2005).]

Jeffy Caballero
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Jeffy's heart sank. They were steps away from freedom when this fearless girl decided to take on the stranger by herself. A quick check revealed that she actually was very afraid, yet she was standing her ground. Jeffy knew enough about people to know that this girl was unusual. Most folks didn't dare to face their fears even for their own sake, and here she was standing up for him! He knew he wasn't supposed to talk about his errand in Hatrack with anyone, but wasn't this just the kind of person he should be talking to?

Will Song
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Will sighed. "Misses. As the good book says, 'A kind word turneth away wrath.'" Will was hoping to turn away wrath. He'd intervened a good many times before; hence the gimpy leg. But, those Chinamen in the ports where he'd been a trader had taught him a good deal about fighting with the open hand, an art nobody in the grand wide middle western knew didly about. "Kind sir," he said to the man in black. "The lady and young man have some business to attend to just now. Pardon us. He turned to the boy. Necesito un baņo?"

Aidan
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posted December 18, 2005 02:40 AM     Click Here to See the Profile for Aidan   Click Here to Email Aidan     Edit/Delete Message
Aidan felt her temper flare just a bit when the old man stepped in, but by this time her common sense had a strong hold on her emotions. She realized this may be the only way to get out of this unscathed. Tentatively, she took a step backwards, still glaring at the stranger before her. This ploy sometimes worked for the wild creatures, and perhaps she'd get lucky with it--retreating without cowardice. Let's hope this works...

Jeffy Caballero
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Jeffy decided that it would be impolite to point out that the man who had probably just saved him by a beating had imperfect Spanish grammar, especially since Jeffy's command of English was likely as tenuous.
"Si, senor, necesito un bano y tambien necesito dormirme..."
Jeffy strode purposefuly forward and prayed that the irrationaly courageous girl would follow him once she realized that he didn't need her protection from the stranger in black.

Will Song
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Will watched the boy retreat into the distance. 'Until we meet again, young master of your own fate," he thought and turned to go. He was reminded of the story of the seeds. Some fell among the rocks and sprouted right up but just as soon died away for lack of a good foundation. Some fell in among the weeds and sprouted right up but withered away for no lack of bad companions. The rest settled in a good spot with good earth and good companions and grew up to be more than ever they could have imagined. He nodded in the direction of the lady and the gentleman. "Good day sir, ma'am. May you find a good spot to settle in. My time here is at an end." At that, he turned to leave back through the woods from whence he came.

Aidan
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Aidan kept her eyes on the stranger in black, but listened to the conversation going behind her. The boy and the old man spoke to each other in Spanish, and Aidan thought this time she could understand what was being said. Something about a bathroom or bath and sleep, she thought; the words were similar to the French ones. She took another step backwards, and almost dared a glance behind her. But instinct wouldn't let her.

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The stranger chuckled... it was just as well for him. Being an observer was his natural niche in life, not to sound like a high-class Easterner in an way. The boy had needed a room, and he stranger was in no position to offer him any help in regards to that. So when the lady and the old timer walked in, he just stepped back and let THEM sort it out. Hey, it worked, didn't it?

And now, this girl... It had been a long time since anybody had the guts to say THAT to him. He simply smiled and tipped his hat.

"My apologies, ma'am," the raspy voice drawled, "The boy needed a room and I wasn't in no position to help him. Think he mighta just helped himself, though. My apologies again, I'm forgettin' my manners. Just who is the pretty young lady I'm addressin' at the moment?"

Aidan
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posted January 07, 2006 05:23 PM     Click Here to See the Profile for Aidan   Click Here to Email Aidan     Edit/Delete Message
It took a moment for Aidan's brain to process what had just happened. She blinked a few times, and the anger left her face. She stared at the stranger for another moment before slowly replying, "My name is Aidan Swift." It took all her concentration to keep her jaw from hitting the floor.

She eyed the stranger for a minute, trying to figure out what had caused the sudden change of heart. "Pardon my asking, but I didn't catch your name, Mister...?"

Firestorm
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The stranger stamped out his cigaretted on his palm, not wanting to bother the girl with his smoking. Deftly spinning the cigar in his hand, he shoved it into a pocket.

"My given name is Jackson Marshall, ma'am," the stranger replied, "folk call me Red. And may I make mention that you've got an awful lot of courage, ma'am? It's been a long time since anyone had the guts to talk to me like that."

Aidan
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posted January 08, 2006 04:07 PM     Click Here to See the Profile for Aidan   Click Here to Email Aidan     Edit/Delete Message
Blood rushed to Aidan's cheeks. She dropped her eyes for a few seconds. When she returned her gaze on Mr. Marshall, the roaring fire had left them, and now the flames were back to their normal size. She bit her lip, then grinned sheepishly. "I do apologize. My mouth tends to run faster than my mind can catch up."

She met his gaze, and then looked away again, completely embarassed. She cleared her throat uncomfortably, and attempted to explain her actions. "You see, I heard the horses, and that led me out here where I ran into, quite literally, this boy. He seemed so frightened, and then I saw you, and...well, I got a bit carried away." Aidan looked up and smiled apologetically. "Again, I'm truly sorry."

Jeffy Caballero
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posted January 09, 2006 06:06 PM     Click Here to See the Profile for Jeffy Caballero   Click Here to Email Jeffy Caballero     Edit/Delete Message
Jeffy watched the man and the girl talking from the window. He couldn't tell what they were saying, but the intense fear swirling around himself and the girl that had nearly deafened him moments earlier had dissipated. Come to think of it, that man who had come out to help hadn't seemed to be afraid of anything, which was sure strange for a situation that intense. Oh, well, it seemed that the girl was safe, so his obligation as a gentleman (or aspiring gentleman, at any rate) was satisfied. He looked around but didn't see anyone to offer him a room anywhere in the front room; on the other hand, nobody to run him off either. Rather than risk running into a disgruntled proprietor further in, Jeffy collapsed into the closest chair and promptly fell asleep.

Firestorm
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posted January 10, 2006 03:30 AM     Click Here to See the Profile for Firestorm   Click Here to Email Firestorm     Edit/Delete Message
"No harm done, ma'am," Red replied, "but a bit more caution could go a long way."

With this, he reached down and lifted the right side of his coat ever so slightly. Through the blackness of his garments glinted the silver hilt of his bowie knife.

"There're a lot of bad men who would love to do you harm. The next one you run into just might be one of them."

Aidan
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posted January 10, 2006 01:39 PM     Click Here to See the Profile for Aidan   Click Here to Email Aidan     Edit/Delete Message
At the glint of the silver knife, Aidan's eyes narrowed. She didn't like where this was headed, and felt the fire within her start to grow. She looked up at the stranger, defiance sparkling clearly in her eyes. "I'll keep that in mind," she replied coolly. She tilted her head in farewell, and turned to leave, all of her senses on high alert now. She walked a few steps before pausing, then turned around once more. "But I think you underestimate me, sir. I am not as helpless as I seem." And with that, she walked back up the steps and into the inn, calm and confident.

Jeffy Caballero
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posted January 19, 2006 02:03 PM     Click Here to See the Profile for Jeffy Caballero   Click Here to Email Jeffy Caballero     Edit/Delete Message
Jeffy was startled awake by the sound of the front door closing. For a second, he was totally disoriented and paniced. Where was he? He saw the girl walk in and instantly remembered everything. He was glad to see her unharmed, but wary to see if she was followed inside. He smiled at her but didn't say anything, affording her complete freedom to smile in return and then head to her room or to initiate a conversation.

Aidan
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posted January 20, 2006 03:04 PM     Click Here to See the Profile for Aidan   Click Here to Email Aidan     Edit/Delete Message
Aidan paused just inside the doorway. She took a deep breath to keep from falling to bits. She thought over what had just happened. The blood drained from her face, but she remained determined to keep her courage up. If the stranger had wanted to do something, he would have done so by now. Thinking this made her feel better, and she sighed, relieved.

Aidan looked over, and saw the boy she'd helped asleep in the chair. Her entrance had startled him awake, and he gave her a sleepy smile. Aidan smiled back, and watched him for a moment. She wanted to ask him if he was all right, but from their previous experience, it didn't seem like he spoke any English.

She waited a moment longer, debating. Then she walked over to the boy, and smiled warmly again. "Hello," she said softly. Not knowing what else to say, she stood there, feeling silly, hoping the boy could understand her.

Jeffy Caballero
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posted February 06, 2006 03:45 PM     Click Here to See the Profile for Jeffy Caballero   Click Here to Email Jeffy Caballero     Edit/Delete Message
Jeffy paused for a moment, decided to go with his gut, then plunged forward. He tried to use his best English that he learned here and there from the various educated people he'd been fortunate enough to spend time with. "I'm sorry, Miss, I do speak English, I was just afraid of that man and I decided that pretending I didn't was the best way to avoid having to explain myself to him. I came here to look for some people, but I got... sidetracked on my way, and I don't even know if any of them are here. Right now, I just want to rest and start looking for them tomorrow. Thank you for all of your help, it was... not what I would have expected."

Aidan
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posted February 08, 2006 12:15 PM     Click Here to See the Profile for Aidan   Click Here to Email Aidan     Edit/Delete Message
The words, "I'm sorry, Miss," took Aidan by complete surprise. For a moment, she thought she was suddenly understanding Spanish, until the boy finished his sentence, "I do speak English." He then told Aidan his little tale, and her heart went out to him. She didn't mind so much that he'd mislead her into thinking he wasn't fluent; it just made her feel a bit silly, which was nothing new for Aidan.

"You're very welcome, though I think I did more damage than harm," Aidan chortled. "My name is Aidan, and if you happen to need any more help, you're more than welcome to come and find me. Right now, I'm just looking for a place to settle in for a while. I might be a bit tricky to track down, but I'll keep an eye out for you." She smiled gently. "I'll let you get some rest, and perhaps I'll run into you later." With that, she turned and walked toward the door.

Jeffy Caballero
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posted February 10, 2006 11:43 AM     Click Here to See the Profile for Jeffy Caballero   Click Here to Email Jeffy Caballero     Edit/Delete Message
His troubled conscience eased, Jeffy smiled, laid down, closed his eyes and promptly fell asleep. If he was meant to meet her again, he would...

Aidan
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posted February 14, 2006 12:36 AM     Click Here to See the Profile for Aidan   Click Here to Email Aidan     Edit/Delete Message
Aidan stepped out into the cool night air, and took a deep breath. The smell of the trees and grass swirled around her, and she closed her eyes, taking it all in with a smile. She stood like this for a few moments, soaking up the moonlight.

Slowly opening her eyes, she headed towards the woods. No longer did she feel small and tired; the stars were calling to her, begging her to dance beneath them. Her eyes widened with excitement, and she sat down on the steps to undo her shoes. Pulling off her confining stockings, she wiggled her toes, letting them enjoy the room to stretch. Aidan then stood up, and walked across the dirt and grass, as silent as a passing shadow. She slipped into the nearest grove of trees, and with a slight glance behind her, dove deeper into the patchwork of branches.

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Shep was in a foul mood, which is to say that he was feeling about normal. Nothing had gone right today.

"Lazy people! That's all it is. Just plain laziness!" Shep slammed the oven door just missing burning his thumb for the third time today.

"I'm here working, ain't I?"

"Little bit o' snow and suddenly everyone decides they don't need to abide by their commitments!"

"OWWWWW!!" Shep let out a streak fit to peel the paint had anyone been silly enough to paint an Inn's kitchen.

He glared at the clearly terrified slip of a girl who had the misfortune of being assigned to deliver the news that no butter would be available today, or any day until the cold snap broke. It was just too cold.

"WHAT ARE YOU STILL DOING HERE?" Shep bellowed.

Close to tears the child turned and fled out into the cold, preferring it immeasurably to the blistering heat of the kitchen.

"And just what are people supposed to have on my scones?" Shep yelled after the fleeing form.

"Laziness! Just plain laziness through and through. Apparently I'm the only one that has to work when THE SNOW AIN'T EVEN TO THE WINDA SILLS!" He directed out the open kitchen window.

Even though the weather was frigid outside, the stoves and ovens kept the kitchen just slightly below sweltering.

Besides, the pies wouldn't sit on the sill properly when the window was closed.

Shep placed an apple pie next to the two pumpkin pies already cooling.

Will W'stle
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posted January 23, 2008 06:58 PM     Click Here to See the Profile for Will W'stle   Click Here to Email Will W'stle     Edit/Delete Message
From his spot under the eves, Will watched the girl flee the baker's terrible wrath.

Will didn't much care for bullies, but he also didn't much care for getting involved in other's people's disagreements. 'Specially when one of the disagreeing parties was a big as the baker.

He stuck his hands under his arms to try to keep some feeling in his fingers.

He stiffened as the baker came to the window, but relaxed as the big oaf didn't even glance outside.

Will watched the steam rise from the cooling pies. The steam seemed almost to form words in the air. The words said, "EAT ME!"

Muted sounds told him the baker was now occupied in other parts of the kitchen. Who was Will to ignore the plea of a humple pie?


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