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Roy Willis New Member |
I am a trailer park escapee who joined the Navy during the Vietnam War to evade the draft. The Navy tricked me, sending this son of a waitress and oilfield worker from a small conservative community in South Louisiana to San Francisco in 1969. (Think Haight-Ashbury in full bloom.) There, literally on the dock of the Bay, I started re-thinking almost everything I thought I knew. I could only take so much of that uncertainty, so after four years of wearing bell-bottom britches I returned to the bayous, where I earned degrees in communications and law and got mixed up in politics and married my college sweetheart. Politics took us Washington, DC, where we’ve lived since 1980. I became intoxicated by power as a senior congressional aide and spent a decade helping write law. Then, I spent eight years as a lobbyist writing PAC checks to politicians who sometimes did what I wanted them to do; then, I realized I had lost touch with my soul. In 1998, I became the founding president (now CEO) of a nonprofit organization that sponsors research, training, safety, and public education programs related to propane (yes, that gaseous fuel some 50 million Americans use to grill outdoors). I do a great deal of technical writing, speeches, and thinking and jotting down notes about stories I've dreamed of writing for years and years. Now, on the threshold of my sixties, I am trying to figure out what I want to do with what’s left of my life, and I think writing those stories is something I might as well do. Oh, in the 34 years since taking our vows, Margaret and I had and reared three daughters and a son. I’m a backsliding Christian, an occasional landscape/cityscape painter, and a workaholic. Is that enough of an induction? So, how do I get started? What should I read? Which conferences must I attend? IP: Logged |
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Meredith Member |
Welcome to the treehouse.
quote: As far as I can answer these questions: You start by writing and reading. It takes a fair amount of practice to perfect the craft. We're pretty much all working on that here. I don't think you're required to attend any conferences, although I understand some of them can be helpful. Reading, well, for starters:
Other than that, just join in. Have some of your work critiqued, here. Critique the work of some other writers. That's a great way to learn. It's amazing sometimes, what you will see in another writer's work that you never notice in your own. [This message has been edited by Meredith (edited October 10, 2009).] IP: Logged |
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extrinsic Member |
Welcome, fellow traveler. I've been on another side of your life history, close in many regards, like we could have been on the opposite sides of a fence somewhere. Where you've been drawn to the center of power, I've avoided it but gotten sucked into the peripheries where I can observe the behind-the-scenes byplay of politics as usual. Still, it's touched my soul in meaningful ways. I'm intrigued by your being from shy country, but not being shy, per se. Where to start; wade into the shallow end or dive headlong into the deep end. Stand by the pool and watch for a while, get a sense for the flow, the decorum, the depth, direction, and purposes of the discussions. Take a wild splash on a whim. One caution, address the writing, not the writer. I second Meredith's recommended reading. Card's MICE principles are a signal contribution to the craft of writing. They regularly come up in discussions hereabouts. I've got a longer list of recommended writing craft reading, but much of it is on advanced writing principles and impenetrably dense reading. Good first approach titles to read after Card's might be available for browsing at the library on their writing shelf. I don't remember the titles of the ones I first picked up. But they got me started on some of the cornerstones of storycraft. The admonition given since grade school to writers to read, read, read widely and broadly doesn't change for any age of writer. Special emphasis on the topical areas you write in are a plus. Say John Grisham, for example. Legal and political intrigue. Thriller genre, perhaps. Maybe military genre, or regional genre. Local politics, goverment and big businesss intrigue seem like naturals for your topical areas. I'm not much of a convention goer. Rubbing elbows with jostling mobs gives me the heebie-jebbies or I faint. Used to self-medicate for that issue, but I had to give it up. So no joy there from me. [This message has been edited by extrinsic (edited October 10, 2009).] IP: Logged |
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Roy Willis New Member |
Thanks for the welcome. As it turns out, I have a few days on the road to read "instructional" materials and, thanks to you, a short reading list. I just finished Ender in Exile (my 9th OSC book) and am energized and inspired to convert "someday" into "right now." We'll see how dedicated to writing I turn out to be. First step, however, is making sure I'm not a complete idiot by ensuring that my work is beyond Creative Writing 101 (didn't take that course) and ready to share. I've read a number of your posts to other newbies, and appreciate the gentle encouragement you've offered us want-to-bes. Since I'm still clinging to lowest branches of the treehouse, perhaps you could show me the route to your writing on the site. RWW IP: Logged |
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Roy Willis New Member |
extrinsic -- power sucks us all into its sphere. We either steer it, or it steers us, or both, truth be told. Thanks for confirming Meredith's counsel. I'm on it. As for reading, I do love it. Like painting, it connects me to the creative force of the expanding universe. And you're right, it is basic. You guessed correctly. I'm actually a shy person, and politics for me was a constant kabuki dance. It was the only way I could do it at that national level and, eventually, I discovered that I was becoming the character I played rather than myself, following a script rather than my heart. I had to escape, but I didn't get far enough away, at least not yet. My attraction to conferences (versus conventions, which I hate as much as you apparently do) is that they are in essence about the spoken word and, thus, take me to origin of storytelling. See you in the treehouse. RWW IP: Logged |
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Meredith Member |
quote: I hang out mostly around the novel support group (NSG under Hatrack Groups). I've only attempted a couple of short stories since I've been here. And only one of those actually worked. The latest version of the query I'm struggling with is in Fragments and Feedback for Novels. I'll always take any suggestions on that {expletive deleted*. The first thirteen lines of Dreamer's Rose (my current WIP), The Shaman's Curse, and Blood Will Tell are also in Fragments and Feedback. I don't think I've got the latest first thirteen of The Ignored Prophecy up anywhere. That's likely to change, anyway. [This message has been edited by Meredith (edited October 11, 2009).] IP: Logged |
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dee_boncci Member |
Hello, Just wanted to add to the book recommendations. For someone just entering the fray of storytelling I would recommend "Immediate Fiction" by Jerry Cleaver. It does a nice job of presenting a simple story model that is straightforward to apply and work with without being in any way limiting. For me it's niche comes step before something like Character and Viewpoint. The Brown and King book recommended above is one of my staples, and along the same lines you might check out "A Dash of Style" by Noah Lukeman. It's a nice little tutorial on grammer/style conventions used in fiction. Besides that just start writing! Sounds trite, I know, but that's the way it works. There are topical forums on this site, a couple of which are intended as places where we can share our stuff and get feedback from other members. I'm sure there is a FAQ or something somwhere, maybe under the very first forum topic, that would serve as an overview. [This message has been edited by dee_boncci (edited October 12, 2009).] IP: Logged |
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Roy Willis New Member |
dee_boncci, et al Merci beaucoup! The books are ordered and on their way. My 15-day road trip was exhausting, but Seattle and Rio de Janeiro are good places to expend one's energy. I spent evenings in my hotel room reading and writing. Hopefully, a few fragments will be ready to post in a few months. My story is taking better shape simply by entering the treehouse situated in a bountiful orchard of nourishing fruits, delightful nuts and charming blossoms. I'm beginning to see that the duty of all in the treehouse is to bring your own leafs. RWW IP: Logged |
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skadder Member |
Hi, Also try: Strunk and White-The Elements of Style. I would also recommend critting stuff as best you can for a few weeks, then post an intro of your own. It's through the process of critting others and trying to write yourself that your work will improve. Oh yes...avoid purpality. [This message has been edited by skadder (edited October 18, 2009).] IP: Logged |
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