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This is just an idea I've come up with and feel like doing, but I have absolutely no idea where to start, so any help from anyone would be greatly appreciated!!
A Little Background Info The Creeping Death is the 10th plague which bestowed upon the Egyptians - the Angel of Death. In the movie his presence has been represented by a green cloud, but actual in the Jewish tales you can not see his arrival. He was sent by God to kill every first born child. The Jews knew how to save their first born sons, because Moses told them that they just have to put lambs blood on their doors for keeping the angel of death from stopping at those houses to kill the first born man. However the Egyptians didn't knew of that protective measure.
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^^ That probably came out wrong, Rasta certainly took it the wrong way.
That's not my idea, it's history. I know it is because I'm Jewish. I just thought of it as a good thing to put in writing, because I know many people don't actually know about the truth behind the "Creeping Death."
Rasta's already rejected it, saying I've stolen the idea, but whatever.
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Borrowing from OSC's "A Thousand Ideas in an Hour" . . .
Main character. Man or woman? How old? Where does he live? Jew or Egyptian (or something else)? What happens to him? Etc., etc. I think it sounds promising, although I don't know where you sell historical short fiction.
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I think passover would make an awesome premise for a story. You could even make it futuristic. Or set it in a Nazi consentration camp--Oooo, I like that idea. I might just snatch that one right up. Thanks.
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I didn't see the objection (from Rasta?), but - although I'm not Jewish - I do know the story. I didn't it was called "Creeping Death" though! That's chilling enough, whoo. Anyway, what's your idea for the story? I assume you intend to write a character from that time, either Jewish or Egyption, or perhaps from the Angel's view? I think it sounds interesting. Meenie
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Rasta argued the case over MSN, that's why it's not there.
I was thinking about doing it from an Egyptian character's point of view, because they were the ones most affected by this. I'm not saying the Jews weren't affected either, but the Egyptians didn't know how to stop Creeping Death so I feel their story would be a lot more... sad, if you will?
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Basing a story on an event in history-- even just rewriting that historical event-- is not "stealing". It is creative interpretation.
How many stories do you suppose are out there about ------- (fill in the blank with your favourite historical event). It doesn't matter what you put in that blank, you're likely to find dozens, maybe hundreds of stories about it. Did they all "steal" the idea or the setting? Maybe the first one is okay, but the rest were "stolen"?
Of course not! They all merely chose the same event or era to interpret, and each crafted a story about it. And each story is different from the others.
Develop your story, Ezuma. Write it. I think it is a wonderful premise for a story!
quote:I was thinking about doing it from an Egyptian character's point of view, because they were the ones most affected by this. I'm not saying the Jews weren't affected either, but the Egyptians didn't know how to stop Creeping Death so I feel their story would be a lot more... sad, if you will?
then surely egyptian would be perfect, no. You should have a shot at writing 13 lines now pleae. If you have more soon after, I'd like to read it.
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I've decided to put a twist on the story of 'Creeping Death,' and have the protagonist, an Egyptian who can contact the mind of the Creeping Death, and can hear him speaking to him, but cannot himself talk to the Angel of Death.
The man first contacts the Creeping Death when the plague is first bestowed upon the Egyptians, and hears his song whenever he kills somone.
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Generally, we can be of more help if you show us, don't tell us. That is, instead of telling us what your plot is going to be, go ahead and WRITE a fragment and post it. Then we can be of some constructive assistance to you.
Someone can have the greatest plot in the world, but if they don't express it clearly in their writing it will tank. And, conversely, you can have a less original plot but bring originality to the writing and make it shine.
Show us the work and then we can offer an educated opinion on how it will fly.
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