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Topic: Without a Legacy to Stand On revised, 1,000 words, needs readers
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Igwiz
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Hello all:This is my Flash Fiction contest piece, and everybody said they liked the idea, and liked the general story and hated the ending. So I've revised it. I would love to post a first 13, but I have already posted part of the body in the Open Discussions About Writing, here: http://www.hatrack.com/forums/writers/forum/Forum1/HTML/004532.html I could use some more feedback on this, so any readers are welcome. Thanks, Thane
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monstewer
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I'll take a look at it if you like 
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LCastle
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I'll look, too.
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InarticulateBabbler
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I think I've helped isolate why those ellipsis are so distracting.
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