It's kind of short, but it drives straight to the point.

For a one word story it's pretty good. It has a certain finality to it but leaves you wondering if there is going to be a part two.

Good thing he beat me to it though.

It's refreshingly concise, leaving something to the imagination of the reader yet it still says something.

I also wonder if there will be a part two.

Maybe it could be sent to a Twitter magazine.

Did it. Wrote a Twitter story. Decided to make it a Christmas tale.

Thanks guys, that was the best Christmas present. Well, no. The second best.

Sorry about the deletion. I was going to ask for a critique on a new story, but I decided to enter it in the 'Inhuman' challenge. Hopefully I get the same kind of reviews.