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Not bad at all. And nice to know how to pronounce her name.
But was that your voice? If so can you do mine when the time comes???
But even though I didn't notice a buzz there did seem to some extra noise in the background. But that's isn't unusual for this type of thing.
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Based on some other suggestions, I'm probably going to go back and add some text to the graphics. I'll check for that buzzing noise and see if I can eliminate it.
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Not bad. Except some of your words are different from the text, but if you planned that or don't care that's probably fine. But it still does add to it.
Even though personally I think you need that page turning three times maybe...but that's up to you.
With all these E-books, novelettes do you have a web site? I don't mean your blog. I've read two different comments that it's best to have a web site. It doesn't have to be fancy, a free one would work.
Yes I know "all these" may not be quite right yet, I used poetic license.
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The blog is the only website I have currently. That and my author pages on Smashwords/Amazon/Goodreads.
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