Back by popular demand! (One guy asked me to post it...isn't that popular demand?) 1st 13 of my novel, The Meat House. For a quick synopsis, see my book blurb thread.
The bus to Baranwal International Penitentiary was the most disgusting thing Leonard had ever seen. Freaks and retards everywhere. They made him sick. There was a kid with a missing arm, crammed in next to a guy with a growth on his neck that was half the size of his head. It forced his head to the side, so he always looked like his neck was broken. A lady with a gaping hole where one of her eyes should have been kept twitching like she was being electrocuted. One boy looked like a skeleton, skin stretched tight over his bones, and his head was covered in bald patches. No matter where Leonard looked, this filth was all he could see. Half-people. They were crammed into the bus like so much garbage. Leonard felt sick.
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