It is long but I would appreciate readers' reviews. Especially from fellow writers, however I in no way want to jeapordize the potential to publishh this in the future.
Can I legally mail this section to an interested party and they could read it and critique it. Also would anyone be interested?
I also do not want plagerism or idea theft to occur (even though teh draft probably isn't nearly that good) but I feel the members here are honorable.
If you're interested in helping me and would like to read it I would very much appreicate it.
You can legally mail it to whoever you want, and as long as you mail it only to select persons known to you, expressly for the purpose of critiquing the material, it doesn't count as publishing.
If your story has an idea that's original and interesting enough for me to be even slightly tempted to steal it, rest assured that I will do exactly that. If you are willing to take that risk, by all means send it over
I will however wait until a few new things are revised and the section is a little more polished. As of now a very critical point has risen and a few very important things need to be worked out. A good part of the work may need to be re-written so until then I can send you nothing.
However I do again reiterate that I admire your earnesty.